Chapter 8-Cracking the Code

Jan 22, 2011 10:14

In this Chapter: A little work, a little relaxation, a little dancing
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Ashes and Sparks - Chapter 8 anonymous September 22 2011, 22:36:36 UTC
Finally got around to checking back on this wonderful story; sorry it’s taken so long.

He, he! No doubt to regale my Fred with later on, he thought resentfully. I rather like jealous Spike. Damn that dashing Cadwaller-Timsey, Fred is totally going to lose interest in poor old Spike!!! It must be the tweed!!! It does that for a women every time, turns their heads every time!

Spike grit his teeth. “Just point me in the direction.” Like a bloody Alsatian, I am. Trained for sniffing out the goods. Poor old Spike; how he suffers! I suspect that he may still posses one or two tiny little insecurities, but at least Cadwaller-Timsey set him straight and Fred isn't the type to deny it.

Loved the chapter. Fred and Spike are right together! An excellent piece of writing.

Edelweiss

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Re: Ashes and Sparks - Chapter 8 sistercuervo September 24 2011, 13:15:54 UTC
Thanks so very much for reading this. I swear, I haven't forgotten it, just trying to get it right. I'm working on a mostly Fred chapter and sweating over her "voice". More very soon.

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