Rapid Response, Lingering Thoughts

[sisterdanger]

The parched soil of the desert floor was comforting. Not because it was familiar, but because it was timeless. Unlike seasonally changing forests, trees that counted rings each year, this dirt just was. Just like the timelessness of unlife

Comments

[arrowforhire]

Wow. This is really well-written. Excellent pacing and tempo.

I hope the next time I lose a character I get eulogies like this. :)