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[siva_godess]

Angela Siva

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[poprawkz]

"He soon meets up with Jerome (McGregor), who once was a power genetically enhanced man."

power genetically enhanced man? i'm sorry, what?

"Gattaca’s theme though set in a science fiction environment is still a predominate one."

Gattacas' theme, though set in a science fiction environment is still a predominant one.

Although if I were you I would change the word theme to genre and the word one to theme. Also using "1984-esque" would be an apt description word.

[siva_godess]

thank ya sire i fixed it just before i turned it in :)

[poprawkz]

Well I hope you religiously run things through spellcheck because I didn't fix all the mistakes, hehe. Also I fogot a comma in one of those sentences. Oh well... bully me.