Comments | sixpackokittens: Monologues to Self 4am (1/2)

sixpackokittens

Monologues to Self 4am (1/2)

Jan 14, 2006 06:15

OMG! I have written my first qaf fic... and it's short and total fluff!

Thanks to the brilliant tgray for all of her lovely feedback and encouragement ( Read more... )

qaf fic

Comments 24

asm614 January 14 2006, 18:08:52 UTC

This was so sweet...

That last line - perfection :)

Thanks for sharing, and hope to see more from you! :)

sixpackokittens January 15 2006, 00:46:26 UTC

Thanks :)

Currently Justin is talking to himself in my head and I can't seem to shut him up... heehee.

crazy4qaf January 14 2006, 20:50:08 UTC

But somewhere in the dark recesses of your mind, your inner queen is gleefully dancing in circles dressed in a pink tou tou, and there's no gag big enough to shut her up and no rope strong enough to tie her down.

Alright. *inhales deeply* I could kiss you for hours just for offering this mental image. No, really. :p And I would quote more lines, but I might as well quote the whole thing, cuz it`s almost like you crawled inside of my QAF obssessed brain. Just perfect and so fucking honest, that I might just break down and cry for Brian from all the happiness. Anyway, excellent job on your first fic, hon. And don`t be shy... Write more soon, please. *grins*

sixpackokittens January 15 2006, 00:49:20 UTC

*faints from kind words*

Thank you for reading/comment, and so happy that you also like that image of Brian's inner child. I couldn't stop laughing while writing that part:)

yes, more to come... *g*

crazy4qaf January 15 2006, 01:04:49 UTC

*bounces off the walls from the excitement*

brokenwingfairy January 14 2006, 21:57:52 UTC

this can not be your first!!Your Brian voice is perfect Looking forward to reading more qaf fic from you cause this was brilliant :)

sixpackokittens January 15 2006, 00:52:51 UTC

It is I swear! I resisted for so long... this QaF obession is going to kill me :)

and thanks for the lovely comment :D

shadownyc January 15 2006, 00:07:48 UTC

This was an excellent first fic. The concept -- "Monologues at 4 AM" was a very creative angle to a frequently written plot. You did a very nice job and your POV writing style was well thought out and clear. I hope to see more from you in the future. :D

sixpackokittens January 15 2006, 00:56:11 UTC

*blushes some more* thank you :)

Justin's pov is up next, and he is such a cheese ball!

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sixpackokittens January 15 2006, 06:41:26 UTC

Thank you! *g*