This Weird Dance

[sixpence_jones]

Title: This Weird Dance
Challenge: Trapped
Team: OotP if we write M. (Someone else if ootp don't.)
Rating: M...M I tell you!
Length: 13x100

AN: This is completely out of my comfort zone. I don't know if it is lemons, limes or clementines but it is citrus and I don't write citrus. I blame the exchange and the desire to work some writing muscles. It is

Comments

[carley9]

I think you hit the mood spot on. The set up and everything that followed flowed and if you didn't say so, I wouldn't have thought this was your first citrus-y tidbit :)

[teddyradiator]

Just lovely! I don't think you or your Exchange recipient have a thing to worry about.

[eoforyth]

Very nice :)

[ks516]

Very evocative. Great job!

[shiv5468]

That's absolutely lovely. Nothing to worry about at all.