no it's really, really good. it's really unique, i've never read anything like it, and the flow is really nice. It's really sad. the stuff you posted later today was a little too sexual for me, haha. also i don't listen to rap, but i'm pretty sure you do. all the slippin's and trippin's and droppin' and all that rapper-boy language isn't my style, but i think somehow it works for you, even though you're just a white boy stoner kid. i hope you're doing alright, though. i know these sure sound like you're not. are you editing these things? or just typing them out really fast? they're impressive either way.
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walk backwards. what are you hesitating for? kiss me goodbye and show me the door, i'll sit on the floor and cry, i'll try to stay.. like a baby..
i wasn't looking for anyone to save me, sweetheart, you did.
sweet dreams and vanailla ice cream, the seam -- seamlessly sealed with one ounce left to feel.
this is why i talk real, real real real real fast. there is only one second left before my heart burst laugh!
u-turn, more or less, i-turn back - stop and flip the bitch (again) for the fifth time, i'm settling in LA. today is my last day.
her, fucking, way.
only one thing left to say:
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fill in the blank, my ship already sank.
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