Ripples

[sizzchick3431]

            “Hmmm…” She seems to consider my explanation for a moment before her smile grows even wider and she giggles again.

“Why are you laughing? You don’t seem the least bit upset…” I drop my gaze suddenly hurt myself but she lowers her eyes so she can continue to look into mine.

“Silly Cloud. Of course it makes me sad

Comments

[alexjblackford]

For this being your first fanfic, it was absolutely adorable. Great job. I liked it a lot.

I like how you gave Cloud and Aerith the closure they finally needed.

[sizzchick3431]

Thank so much! I never could find a fanfic that gave Cloud the closure I felt he needed with Aerith so I wrote my own! I'm glad you liked it!