Really love your writing style. Seems clean and polished and clear, very practiced.
Your choice of details, from delicate fingers to moist mouths and clenching stomachs, captured me without hope of rescue. (And, frankly, gave me a bit of penis envy. =/ Damn you, Asian pretty boys. How is it fair to the rest of us?! *shakes fist at God*)
Sexy and innocent. Loved it. <3
As far as school goes: all the more time to be naughtily scribbling fic in your notebook. >;D
oh my, thank you for such a beautiful compliment<3 ^///^ i'm flattered and happy that you like my writing style. one of the best compliments to receive as a writer.
xD oh the agony and envy! i know exactly what you mean! Asian boys are just... *swoons* we, girls, do not stand a chance...
LOL that is what i'll probably be doing in class xD doodling and writing<3
thanks for reading! :) yesung, when IS he paying attention? xD LOL
aah D: that's horrible. I never liked the heat... always prefered the cold... cross country! sweet~ i used to do it for middle school.. but gave up half way -___-" I realized i'm better for short distances (like the 100m or 200m) then long competitive runs...
ZOMG~ want a brilliant way of fluff! i should try testing out this kind of kiss/chocolate transmission to my other works~ TEE HEE~ too cute, BTW! CHOCOLATE LOOOVE!!!
LOL i was ariming for light fluff that makes you cringe with cuteness... -_____- but *shrugs* i failed... and this is the outcome.
8D chocolates are my FAVORITE sweet treat~ (people who don't like it are crazy to my eyes -___- *no offense to anyone who doesn't like it though*) hahaa, kisses + chocolates = MORE LOVE<3
LOLOL KyuMin + Chocolate = NEW OTP!! 8D i do love me kyumin.. and i do LOVE chocolate!! xDD great, now i have another idea for a story! (humm, i'll write it once i get around to it..)
teehee >3 eternal magnae.. not so innocent as people believe.. LOL
8O today's weather was like freezing in the morning and then like a sauna in the afternoon... i was baking in my sweater by noon -____-" stupid weather... 3rd week? really? gosh, i feel like i'm REALLY behind... and no, first day wasn't that bad actually, waaaay better then i imagined. ^^
*glomps* take your time~ ^w^ i'll be here, i'm not going anywhere. (you don't have to perfect it~ i'm content and happy just by the idea that you are writing one for me~ x3) a femslash? ^///^ that'll be interesting to read.. will look out for it (and it's kyumin!!<333)
8O oh gosh, 103? really? >.< i wouldn't survive in texax then.. xD LOL yeah! 96.. still hot(i guess).. but better! ^^ well, with autumn on its way~ the cool weather will come too!! (not to mention fall clothes as well! *__* shopping...)
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chocolate kisses shall never be the same for me. again. ever. XDDDD
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LOL thanks for reading jisun-ah<333
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YOU IS A STEAMY FLUFF WRITER~
hehe
you're welcome unnie!~ <3
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Your choice of details, from delicate fingers to moist mouths and clenching stomachs, captured me without hope of rescue. (And, frankly, gave me a bit of penis envy. =/ Damn you, Asian pretty boys. How is it fair to the rest of us?! *shakes fist at God*)
Sexy and innocent. Loved it. <3
As far as school goes: all the more time to be naughtily scribbling fic in your notebook. >;D
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xD oh the agony and envy! i know exactly what you mean! Asian boys are just... *swoons* we, girls, do not stand a chance...
LOL that is what i'll probably be doing in class xD doodling and writing<3
thanks for reading! :) glad you enjoyed it.
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yesung, when IS he paying attention? xD LOL
aah D: that's horrible. I never liked the heat... always prefered the cold...
cross country! sweet~ i used to do it for middle school.. but gave up half way -___-" I realized i'm better for short distances (like the 100m or 200m) then long competitive runs...
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want a brilliant way of fluff!
i should try testing out this kind of kiss/chocolate transmission to my other works~
TEE HEE~
too cute, BTW! CHOCOLATE LOOOVE!!!
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8D chocolates are my FAVORITE sweet treat~
(people who don't like it are crazy to my eyes
-___- *no offense to anyone who doesn't like it though*)
hahaa, kisses + chocolates = MORE LOVE<3
thanks for reading! :)
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steamy fluff is love~~~
Too bad when I have a Hersey's Kiss now, I shall be disappointed x3
Kyumin+chocolate=new otp?? LMAO
Yesung is so oblivious~
hehehe, naughty eternal magnae >:3
First day? OH NO.
I hope it wasn't too bad.
I'm on my 3rd week of school. T___T
It was so hooooot today. Stupid Texas
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LOLOL KyuMin + Chocolate = NEW OTP!! 8D i do love me kyumin.. and i do LOVE chocolate!! xDD great, now i have another idea for a story! (humm, i'll write it once i get around to it..)
teehee >3 eternal magnae.. not so innocent as people believe.. LOL
8O today's weather was like freezing in the morning and then like a sauna in the afternoon... i was baking in my sweater by noon -____-" stupid weather...
3rd week? really? gosh, i feel like i'm REALLY behind... and no, first day wasn't that bad actually, waaaay better then i imagined. ^^
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I'm currently working on your fic (I have to make it perfect *_*) and kyumin femslash
OMG I'M SO EMBARRASSED >///<
My weather has been 103 degrees, with barely any rain every day since June.
Now that it's finally 96 degrees, I'm celebrating~
-dances-
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a femslash? ^///^ that'll be interesting to read.. will look out for it (and it's kyumin!!<333)
8O oh gosh, 103? really? >.< i wouldn't survive in texax then..
xD LOL yeah! 96.. still hot(i guess).. but better! ^^ well, with autumn on its way~ the cool weather will come too!! (not to mention fall clothes as well! *__* shopping...)
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