Meus lux lucis
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Pairing: Chuck/Sarah
Disclaimer: Not mine, but does owning the DVD's count?!
Author's Note: This fic is set sometime during Brandon Routh’s five episode stint on Chuck, and for those of you who saw the promo after 3x03 - after Chuck punches Shaw in front of Sarah. Also the title of the fic is Latin - it means My ‘Light’.
Meus lux lucis
Chuck was ( Read more... )
Pairing: Chuck/Sarah
Disclaimer: Not mine, but does owning the DVD's count?!
Author's Note: This fic is set sometime during Brandon Routh’s five episode stint on Chuck, and for those of you who saw the promo after 3x03 - after Chuck punches Shaw in front of Sarah. Also the title of the fic is Latin - it means My ‘Light’.
Meus lux lucis
Chuck was ( Read more... )
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Anyways, I think you've got a fabulous style. There's some really great bits of introspection. The only thing I would critique is that it's a bit confusing - For some reason, I wasn't sure if this was in chronological order, and I'm not sure if that's something you were going for or not. Also, while the characters are very IC, their conversations sometimes seem a bit round-about. Then again, you totally could have meant it to be that way, since sometimes people (and Chuck and Sarah and everyone) talk in circles and never really get what they want to say across.
Um, I hope that helps! Again, I apologize for being an idiot and not commenting before. My mind is a sieve. Just remember that next time you ask me something, haha. But great job! Have you posted this on ff.net?
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