Just a note that I think I need to work on the clarity of the last paragraph of this one a bit more, but it's the nearest approximation I can come up with at the moment.
As usual I'm trying to allude to every potential angle I can possibly conceivably put in, especially the ones I haven't thought of :)
Tho' I admit, yes, I *had* actually thought of that one, it's probably why the word 'cryptosystems' is lazily thrown in there. As bait.
Mwhwhahahaha! You have fallen for my evil plan! Or something.
Clarity was perhaps the wrong word for what I think the last paragraph doesn't have. Maybe 'doesn't quite produce the images in my head that I was aiming for' or 'doesn't read smoothly even for deliberately ambiguous nonsense'...? :)
Most of my stuff is supposed to be confusing if you're reading in a 'what does this mean?' sense. What I have a problem with is maintaining that without descending into complete unreadable indigestibility.
Okay, I guess the next current song needs to be from the Cocteau Twins or possibly Sigur Rós.
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Tho' I admit, yes, I *had* actually thought of that one, it's probably why the word 'cryptosystems' is lazily thrown in there. As bait.
Mwhwhahahaha! You have fallen for my evil plan! Or something.
Clarity was perhaps the wrong word for what I think the last paragraph doesn't have. Maybe 'doesn't quite produce the images in my head that I was aiming for' or 'doesn't read smoothly even for deliberately ambiguous nonsense'...? :)
Most of my stuff is supposed to be confusing if you're reading in a 'what does this mean?' sense. What I have a problem with is maintaining that without descending into complete unreadable indigestibility.
Okay, I guess the next current song needs to be from the Cocteau Twins or possibly Sigur Rós.
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