Everything That Could Have Been and Nothing To Lose

[skate_soar_fly]

Title: Everything That Could Have Been and Nothing To Lose
Pairing: Mark/Eduardo
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: This piece of fiction is based on characters created by Aaron Sorkin and has no basis in reality. This didn't happen, I don't think this likely to happen, and I don’t own anything.
Warnings: Wanders dangerously into the territory of purple

Comments

[im_with_him84]

A little late to comment, but I loved this SO MUCH!
First of all, loved how you wrote both Eduardo and Mark (some authors write one better than the other, but you wrote both of them really, really well and in character).
Also, your descriptions were great. I could practically picture them walking around these places and cities. Very visual.
The end? PERFECT! <3

[skate_soar_fly]

Another comment that totally made my day. I'm so pleased you liked the descriptions - that's really what I was going for so I'm glad it worked. I'm also glad you thought they were in character, thank you for such an awesome compliment, it's more than I could have hoped for! ^_^

[leopardchic79]

Aww, this was very sweet, I really enjoyed it! And I loved your accompanying pictures. :)

[skate_soar_fly]

Aww, thank you! This one was kind of what prompted me to write this, so I'm glad you liked them. ^_^

[fairy_tale_echo]

Wooooow - I love this. I love it. I love the sensual (in the most literal sense of the word) details of being in an unfamiliar place and how that can sometimes relax you in all the right ways, I love how true and well-lived in it all feels. I love the immediacy of the details, the idea that being some place off the map can help you locate yourself AND OMFG I AM JUST BABBLING.

What I am saying is that this is sweet and true and everything I love in fic - we've changed and the world has changed but maybe, maybe. Ugh, the scene where Mark thinks about what it felt like to be working with him again and he just heads for Thailand and - I LOVE IT ALL SO MUCH.

Have you posted this to TSN communities yet? Because you need to. Because fandom needs to read this and you need to write MORE MORE MORE!! :)

[fairy_tale_echo]

OH AND ALSO it's one of my favorite resolutions of the dilution I've read. I love the way you handled it - no bullshit, some apologies, a lot of hurt, but that was that and here we are. UGH AWESOME.

[skate_soar_fly]

Oh wow! Another lovely comment that absolutely made my day. :DDD

I did post this to socialnetwrkfic but not anywhere else. ^^;

I'm so so pleased that you enjoyed the descriptions. They were what prompted me to write this and I really tried to paint a picture of that world - I'm SO glad it worked for you the way I intended!

I'm really blown away by your comment (and everyone else's comments) - it's so sweet and I don't know what to say but thank you so much!!! ♥