Fortune & Romance - Chapter 16: Explosion

Dec 15, 2014 00:00

WARNING: Magical violence and quite a few injuries


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holleyb76 December 15 2014, 17:17:07 UTC
I always love interactions between Mortimer and Dina :D You write them so well together. I think it's interesting Mortimer makes her small minty just as much as Michael does ;)
This should be called the Bella is a judgmental ass chapter. You know how I feel about her. Argh! Even Mortimer seems to think Bella is way out of bounds with her assessment of Dina. I am glad Michael is sticking up for Dina and letting Bella know he won't let her ruin their relationship.
Morty! Oh no! Titania! Oh No! Mike! Oh no! Jennicor! Oh no!

All your shots are so good, as normal. I especially liked the one with Jennicor in the tree. Great chapter!

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nineyellow December 15 2014, 17:46:45 UTC
Love the chapter, especially the ending! Also Servo brushing his teeth was cute :3

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shadowfell December 15 2014, 18:30:01 UTC
EXCITEMENT!!! :D

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mdpthatsme December 15 2014, 20:49:48 UTC
Oh noes! Titania! Jennicor! Such an exciting chapter!
I love Mortimer's interest in Dina and how he's too stubborn to give up XD

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annegirl1323 December 15 2014, 21:38:35 UTC
Wow, what a chapter! I am officially choosing to believe that Mike is just lying under the bed, not smooshed, and that he will crawl out next chapter and be okay. This is what I have to do to keep myself from screaming for more immediately, instead of telling you politely that I loved the chapter and I'm excited to find out what happens next. I'm going to have to go back (as always) and reread and look for all the little details. It's so wonderful to see this story back at last! :-)

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