Comments | sketchylilmofo: hmmmmmmmm

sketchylilmofo

hmmmmmmmm

Dec 07, 2005 17:39

I don't think I post my poems/rhymes/lyrics up in here enough. That's one of the main reason I have a silly LJ ( Read more... )

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angelfire8907 December 7 2005, 23:23:31 UTC

OMG SIMPLY AMAZING! your a wonderful poet! you can write poetry for me anytime *wink* haha. Im ok. ERg hw time. Lata!
Love ya,
Dora
♥

sketchylilmofo December 8 2005, 01:34:55 UTC

awww tahnk u. i'll rememba to write something about u sumtime haha ;-)

angelfire8907 December 8 2005, 23:36:38 UTC

YAYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol WE BETTER HAVE A SNOW DAY TOMORROW!!!!! BUT I WANNA SEE YA, TEHEHEHE! UR SOOO HOTT! lol BYE!
<3 Dora

moonpiecarpet December 8 2005, 00:28:55 UTC

Hollering and hooting at tempting wet baskets no longer full of cooties, but estrogen
I love this line it's got a nice rhythm to it.
I like this poem. The 2nd to last verse confuses me a little, but the rest is nice.

sketchylilmofo December 8 2005, 01:34:15 UTC

Thanx! yeah I don't like the way I ended my 2nd to last stanza I gotta fix dat.