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No Justice - [4/5]

Jan 08, 2009 03:22

Title: No Justice
Author: sketty24
Chapters: 4/5
Characters: The Doctor, Donna Noble, and Captain John Hart.
Rating: T
Spoilers: None specific, but may hold a few mentions of Series 4 of Doctor Who and Series 2 of Torchwood.
Summary: The Doctor meets a stranger upon a refuel in Cardiff, and is accompanied to the prison system of Justica by one of its previous ( Read more... )

donna noble, doctor, john hart, fanfic

Comments 15

mischief89 January 8 2009, 03:35:06 UTC

OHSHIZZNACKLE! ::drags you back from sleep:: Need next chapter naooow!

I really like how you included some of John's backstory in this! :D And yay for somewhat sneaky Doctor! :)

sketty24 January 8 2009, 13:01:35 UTC

Haha, I'll probably write the last chapter tonight.

Does it fit him then? And Time Agents? I had to make quite a bit up, but tried to remain 'canonically' logical. Especially with the Vortex - if it can make the Master unstable; what can it do to a mere human? o.o

mischief89 January 8 2009, 16:17:31 UTC

I can definitely see all of this happening to John and other Time Agents. Definitely makes sense! :)

hab318princess January 8 2009, 12:22:09 UTC

No No No, you can't leave it there!

Never thought about the time travel affecting John like this... (or for that matter Jack)

Great update

sketty24 January 8 2009, 13:02:58 UTC

Don't worry, the final chapter will be along shortly!

I figured it must have some affect on humans. Sure, Time Agents pass a series of tests to prove their strength (I would say physically and mentally!) but I imagine it could still prove to be too much.

Thanks for the review! :)

sweetsyren January 8 2009, 12:32:45 UTC

Ahhh! I've just read these all through from the beginning :) Very nice work but I must know what happens next!

*paces while you write*

sketty24 January 8 2009, 13:05:02 UTC

Yay, new reviewer! :D

Glad you like it! Hehe, when I did fiction before, I think I was hated for my cliffhangers. I think it's happening again. ;)

sweetsyren January 8 2009, 13:06:50 UTC

Oh no - I like them! I' tend to do it in my own stories so you're off the hook ;)

shining_moment January 8 2009, 12:54:51 UTC

Oh my God, yikes!!

Fabulous chapter, again, can't wait to see how he gets them out of there :)

sketty24 January 8 2009, 13:06:04 UTC

Thank you!

You'll find out soon enough! Expect some drama!

*points at your icon* They're in denial. :)

51stcenturyfox January 8 2009, 14:12:58 UTC

Yeah!

I love the details here, like the Doctor tasting the food, the three-foot-tall alien, etc. Feels like watching a film, in the best way.

sketty24 January 8 2009, 15:01:06 UTC

Aw, thank you! I love noting detail in my stories. I think it's the little things that can take it to a whole new level.