Edge Of Passion - Jack/Samantha Fanfiction

[m_ravensblood]

Title: Edge of Passion
Author: M. Elizabeth Ravensblood
Rating: NC-17 Sexuality
Warning: Contains Non-Lethal Erotic Asphyxiation
Pairing: Jack/Samantha
Summary: While in Otis, Samantha is feeling lost in light of the Donald Lucas situation but is pleased when she discovers Lucas isn't Jack and has a night of passion with the man who's haunted her

Comments

[velvetwhip]

I LOVE THIS! Woot! Sexy and fabulous! I am so excited that you wrote this for me! THANK YOU! Wow! Have I ever had a great anniversary!

Gabrielle

[m_ravensblood]

I'm so glad you liked this story! I usually have them in bed and decided to go a bit kinky and unconventional with them for a change :o)

You are most welcome! I'm so glad you had such a wonderful anniversary :D

[silverwolf]

Now this is more like it! Nice and long, with awesome art to boot! YAY!!

And do not worry about the asphyxiation stuff. Like I told you before, the way your write, you almost don't notice it. You could write about BDSM stuff and the most Christian person in the world would fully love it and enjoy it and not even notice the kinky stuff. ;o)

Still, a Pwincess stowy can always be longer. No such thing as one that's too long. MORE!! Perhaps a sequel? O:o)

[m_ravensblood]

I'm glad you were happier with the length of this piece. Wounded may have been long enough for art but I couldn't come up with any ideas that weren't a bit graphic. Perhaps I'll whip some up in time ;o)

LOL There acutally are Christian BDSMers out there. But I am glad that you think my style makes controversial subjects acceptable. I probably got a bit more worried since it was something I have personal experience with.

I see, a nice long sequel dedicated to Moochie, huh? We'll see I may have an idea but I do have some other fics I owe people first :o)

[roman_romantic]

Si! A sequel is in order! Meg's erotica is so romantic and good, no one could find offense in how her wording is so poetic!

[roman_romantic]

Bellismo! The artwork is so dreamlike and the coloring much dramatic! Your story is- *fans self* very much hot! Is sensual but not vulgar - no one writes sex as you can! This story is much beautiful and sexy on many levels.

Edited to be saying that a sequel would be wonderful. And also to be saying that you cannot tell me you don't write S/M well. The edgeplay in this is much beautiful and much skillfully written.

[serialbathera]

wonderful :)