Xenophobia, Part 1

Aug 19, 2010 02:42

Title: Xenophobia (Part 1)
Pairing: Kyuhyun/Donghae
Author: Skipturnstep
Rating: R (for language)
Genre: Romance
Words: 3,342.
Summary: Sequel to Through Sickness and Health, post-Super Junior. Kyuhyun decides that moving to New York City was the biggest mistake of his life.

Lady Gaga is a genius. )

fanfiction:suju pairing:kyuhyun/donghae

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namikaze_jkc August 19 2010, 07:24:10 UTC
*jaw drops*
*picks up jaw from the ground*
IT'S THE SEQUEL!!!!!!!!
It's interesting to see post-Suju fics, even if most of them tend to break my heart. This however, takes things to another level. KyuHae in America! I mean, that alone makes me excited for all the possibilities, and what comes up next. :D Also, I love that some of them still see each other if not, work together. Also, I'm glad that Kyuhyun and ZhouMi remained good friends, but I wonder if there will good news or bad news to follow...

I'll be waiting for the next chapter! Great job! :D

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skipturnstep August 19 2010, 08:03:31 UTC
Yes, the sequel~ XD

I can't say this fic won't be heartbreaking, because really, what's a good fic if there isn't a little emotion?

The one thing I wanted was for Super Junior to end on a good note in this fic. I wanted most of them to at the very least remain in contact. And as I mentioned before, Mimi really is a good guy! It shows through in this fic, I swear :3

I've been toying with the idea of them in New York since about halfway through the first fic, and I figured it would be really interesting to see what I could do with it. Lucky for me, I can write some of this while I'm actually in New York City next week! 1^^

Thank you for reading! The next part will probably be up around Monday.

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namikaze_jkc August 20 2010, 07:09:04 UTC
True,... and I'm glad they're on good terms with each other. :D Though I still have one more question: what happened to Kibum, Hankyung and Kangin? Yay for Gentleman Mimi! :)

You're going to New York? AWESOME! (I've never been out of my country, or to the farther parts of it..) I'll be waiting patiently 'til Monday then.

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skipturnstep August 20 2010, 07:16:32 UTC
I noticed I left out some significant members, haha. XD So I'll just run it down here:
- Eeteuk fades into obscurity, gets married and has a kid and leads a normal life with a 9-5 job.
- Kangin gets married, doesn't have kids. Is unemployed for a large majority of his life.
- Kibum goes back to acting, gets pretty popular.
- Hankyung becomes ~uber famous~ in China but doesn't contact many of the members.

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enlinde August 19 2010, 08:06:59 UTC
Is Kyuhae drifting apart AGAIN?
Poor Kyu! I hate moving home too!
I can't believe you will write a sequel! *Dancing around*
I love this fic but QMi irks me. (Nothing to do with ZhouMi. It's just that I love Kyuhae to be the destined one.)
Thanks so much for writing a sequel!!!
saranghae! XOXO

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skipturnstep August 19 2010, 08:14:14 UTC
Oh don't worry! QMi won't be a pairing in this fic. ^^ Simply friends this time!

Thanks for reading!

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enlinde August 19 2010, 08:22:00 UTC
Nice to hear that QMi won't be a pairing!! Friends Forever sound good to me.

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cablackwood August 19 2010, 08:47:55 UTC
"April 8th, 2014..................it was the day that Super Junior decided to disband."
EXTREAMLLY SAD DAY!!!!!!!! T_T
I know its just a fic, but ITS SAD!! Just reading that part I nearly burst into tears T_T

If that day ever comes..........I WILL CRY!!!

Any hoo, I like this, I like that most of the members still kept in touch with each other. The SuJu family should NOT lose contact!

Kyu, M&M store?!?!?! Not with that beautiful voice of yours! I kinda feel bad for Kyu, trying to adjust to life in New York, probably not the easist cities to adjust to. Hope it all goes good for him..........and Hae X)

I hope that since its a new place, and I get the feeling Kyu's going to have a harder time adjusting to New York life than Hae, that Kyuhae wont get forced apart again *please please*

Again, Loving this story. Glad Through Sickness and Health has a sequal :)

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skipturnstep August 19 2010, 14:46:48 UTC
Well you see, I figured that they were just so close, that they couldn't just lose contact. ^^

You'll just have to wait to see what happens! Thanks for reading ^^

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bonomanic August 19 2010, 11:00:31 UTC
Omg, you really did a sequel! And while I'm still in an appropriate state of shock at the fact that SuJu disbanded and Kyu and Donghae seem to be heading towards a fight and hopefully some nice making up, I'M ALSO UBER HAPPY AND EXCITED AND THANKFUL! :DDD

This makes me want to go to New York, lol. Hopefully, I can go there soon, it's not too far from where I'll be, fortunately. ^^ But the ending of this first part makes me all squeamish and uncomfortable because it feels as if they're living side by side without living with each other (and we have a word for that in German but I don't know if there's a proper English translation). D: Why is it like this ( ... )

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skipturnstep August 19 2010, 14:50:21 UTC
I wasn't lying! XD

Yeah, New York is only about four hours from Boston, which is great. Kyuhyun, I figured, doesn't seem the type to adjust well to big changes -- small changes are okay, but, unlike Donghae, I feel like Kyuhyun has a harder time with it.

Haha, yes XD Giselle, she's...quite the character. And I'm not going to disclose whether or not Bad Romance is of any real significance just yet~

I was thinking about the same as the last one, probably five, maybe six parts. Not sure. :3

Thanks for reading hon~

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bonomanic August 19 2010, 15:07:13 UTC
Lol, I know you weren't, I just wasn't even hoping it would be out so soon! :DDD But I'm glad, it's good to take my mind off my work every now and then, and I like to read a fic or something for a little breather, but it's so awful when there's only crappy stuff around, so I practically lit up when I saw this! :D ( ... )

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bonomanic August 19 2010, 15:19:42 UTC
I mean I know I just finished the last one like two weeks ago, but I just couldn't let it go. I love writing this pairing especially :3 (Also, I'm glad my work isn't 'crappy' XD)

o__o going to New York for one day is SO. HARD. I've done it. Augh. D: You see nothing and you're constantly on the move and it's just...not something you want to try. ^^;

Well, there's two possible ways I can go with this -- Giselle is a main factor in the story, or she's simply the reason they were brought to New York and other events occur instead. I have both scenarios worked out in my mind...I just need to see which one I like more. So if she's a main character, you'll see who she really is, what she's like, whatever. It all depends on what situation I like more. XD

Awww :D This was originally going to be a one-shot, just an overview of how they were surviving post-Suju, but I actually like this idea. :3

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kaoristrife August 19 2010, 15:50:11 UTC
I love this, Kyuhae in America!
<3
Kyuhyun should take the job at the M&M's store! He'll get all the candy Hae could ever want!
And I love this so much that I don't have the mental capacity to write a decent comment.
So just love for you.
-hugs-
....
-throws self at you in fangirlish way-

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skipturnstep August 19 2010, 16:45:26 UTC
I'm glad you like it! -holds you- Thanks for reading :D The next part will probably be up around Monday.

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