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Jun 05, 2005 22:09

It is not an unusual occurance, but today I managed to totally make a complete embarrasing spectacle of myself. (sigh ( Read more... )

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berabis June 8 2005, 01:27:47 UTC
Wow, you're almost back in California!!

btw, have you heard how much of a manuscript (don't even know the proper terms) the agents usually read?

If you're revising book one, I would have to say I felt the prologue was actually the weakest part. It just felt a little Halloween-y*, which didn't work with the rest of the novel for me, but you may have your reasons. I don't know if you wanted my thoughts, but that's all I have, anyway.

* This reminds me of a trick-or-treat song we made up in the sixth grade, "... I'm a maiden, I'm a necromancer, I'm a genie. Happy Halloween-y." :oP

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skittlesqueen June 8 2005, 01:46:27 UTC
lol, I had totally forgotten about that! I dont remember who was who though... but I do remember the happy halloweeny song, we were such weirdos! :) (and I mean that in a loving way ( ... )

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