Undercover Angel, Part VI (3) - The New Dawn

[skk670]

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[rowanceleste]

That was fantastic. I loved all the details and it was completely plausible! I wonder if Martin is the father of Meg's baby? She said he was sweet and since he's a little 'moony', I could see why maybe he wouldn't come forward to ask for help. Probably was buried his head in the sand. I loved this story and your writing! :)

[skk670]

Thank you. I’m so glad you liked it. Did you sneak a peek at my notes? Yes, I think it was Martin, too. I watched "Ruskie Business" and Meg didn't give Duncan a second glance in the first scene. She was irritated with Chaz but spoke to Martin for a long time. I decided that, since he is a jock and not an 09er, her parents didn't approve of him. I don't think Martin was moony - he just fell into a trance every time he looked at Meg. Awww.

Thank you for leaving feedback. Sorry I posted this three times - I kept finding typos in my reply.

[rowanceleste]

Btw, are you going to write an epilogue? Your story cries out for one! Logan finally understands what Veronica needs from him now but as soon as the lawyers sort things out, Duncan will be back in the country...unfortunately Logan can't just pee on Veronica's leg and claim her as his girl, so he's going to have to work at winning her. I want to know if he can win her back before Duncan comes back and she thinks about how much Duncan was there for her and loves her and Logan kept screwing up!

[skk670]

OMG! Thank you for the good laugh. I was able to picture Logan peeing on Veronica's leg and it was ... disturbing. But in a funny way! No, I have no plans to write an epilogue to this story. I did have to leave out a section of my mystery as is and I am TIRED! I am taking a hiatus from writing for a while. I have much to do at work so I won't have a lot of time for fic writing. But I'm so glad you liked this story.

[misa_05]

Wow. I am speechless. I have no words. All of these are going straight into my memories. Another fabulous story.

Now, get back to more Cuddling. :)

[skk670]

Wow, Lady, you really do like to crack the whip! But I am your willing slave. Chapter 8 of Cuddling already started. I was working on it when I got the idea for "Angel". But it will be a few weeks before I can finish it. I have a big project at work that will keep me busy for the next six weeks.

But I will get back to it! Thank you for posting feedback.

[brandyleigh]

That was excellent, the way you made all the different plot points from this season converge and actually make some sense.

[skk670]

Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

[dreamoflove86]

Wow, I'm speechless. I'm kind of sad that this is over, but the end result was just amazing. You did a fantasmic job of pulling together all of the mysteries this season.

*Sigh* If only Meg were still alive...

[skk670]

Yes, I agree with you. That's partly why I wrote this - I wanted to change some of the stuff that went on this season. And I wanted to make SOME sense out of the first 12 episodes.

Thank you for posting feedback.

[tru_balance]

REally Really good but my god my head hurts after trying to piece that together along with logan. thats not the end is it? and it so works with the total drama that is VM. can u imagine if someones life was like that, complete mental breakdown imenint.

this rock so do you

hopes this makes sense im of an energy buzz while also being half asleep
night

[skk670]

Yes, it makes total sense. Unfortunately, I had to write it in the headache-inducing way because I won't have time to write for the next few weeks. I didn't want to leave anyone dangling with this story. So, no, this is no more to this story.

Thank you for leaving feedback.