This was incredible, everything was so detailed and well thought out. It didn't leave me going, "But what about this..." Very impressive! I was curious who the father was and kind of thought it might be Dick (yes i smoke the crack) but then I read in an earlier comment that it was probably Martin. But I might just hang on to the idea that it was Dick and he will be flying off to Cuba to join his little girl, cause it makes me chuckle.
I also thought the ending was awesome, you didn't have Logan and Veronica jumping into bed together as if everything they went through was forgotten and solved in a night(not that I don't thoroughly enjoy those types of fics too, cause I do!). I kept thinking 'yay Logan, you're listening, that's the first step to getting her back, woohoo!' And then he had his epiphany and I patted him on his prettily coiffed head, "Good boy, Logan!"
I think Meg would have to smoke the crack to end up sleeping with Dick. I'm sure Dick is an alien spawn. That's why Betina couldn't become pregnant - Dick isn't human. I like to think it was Martin who was Lilly's dad. Meg said he was "nice but moony". He was mooning over her!
I liked the ending, too. I didn't want to be over-sappy or gloss over their issues. You didn't think it was TOO obvious an ending?
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oh my god. dude, that was so awesome. this had me glued to my seat and that mystery weaved together so well *bows down forever to your amazing creativity*
This is the end of this story. In fact, this is the end of my fic-writing days, for a while. I have a big project at work so I won't have time. That is why I wrote this huge long chapter. I wanted to finish this story before my hiatus.
Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed my story.
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I also thought the ending was awesome, you didn't have Logan and Veronica jumping into bed together as if everything they went through was forgotten and solved in a night(not that I don't thoroughly enjoy those types of fics too, cause I do!). I kept thinking 'yay Logan, you're listening, that's the first step to getting her back, woohoo!' And then he had his epiphany and I patted him on his prettily coiffed head, "Good boy, Logan!"
Loved it, thanks for the great read!
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I liked the ending, too. I didn't want to be over-sappy or gloss over their issues. You didn't think it was TOO obvious an ending?
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Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed my story.
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You managed to bring everything together beautifully.
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