story time :)

[skoobz]

well, today while i was sitting in my comfy chair doing my little relaxation routine (which by the way helps a lot...i just put on some soothing music and sit and relax all the muscles in my body and it feels awesome.) anyways, here is this cool idea for a story that i have

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[gdjiveturkey]

that doesnt make sense tho. because if the man knew everything the boy knew because he is an older form of the boy... he would already know that anything he did would still allow the girl to fall in the hole. he would also know that he should avoid the whole happy thing in the first place since he knew it would end in tragedy. besides that flaw... its pretty tight

[skoobz]

maybe i wasnt clear enough, but he didnt know it until the boy saw it. so its not like he already knew that she was going to fall in. and time only reversed back to the point of while they were embracing before she fell in, so he couldnt have avoided being there

[gdjiveturkey]

yea but if the man was truely the boy at an older age, then he had already experienced being in the boys place.... or it wouldnt be the same person. the man should already have experienced watching himself as an older version... so he should know the outcomes. so now when the boy grows older, he should avoid the girl because he now knows what it will do. and the man should have done the same

[skoobz]

i explained it weird in there and sort of contradicted myself a bit. plus, it takes place way before the boy lived. and its a dream, hes not actually seeing himself in the future. just a sort of fantasy

[light_of_day04]

it breaks all laws of the universe!!! he knows he will do it, but cant avoid it in the future. i dunno man, los scientificos de las cosas fisicas no cree que es posible a conoce que va a ocurar. pero, yo se es un sueño y no es el cuerpo de el niño, pero, con la inteligencia del niño, yo creo que el hombre sera loco con informacion del futuro. y todo su experiencia del hombre, el niño no se que hacer porque todo es nuevo. un niño quien hizo las cosas del hombre, no es possible. y cuantos año tiene el niño? depende en su vida. es todo. paz.

[skoobz]

well at that spanish is great and all, but i really dont care. also, LIKE I SAID BEFORE, he DOESNT see the future, its just a DREAM. get it straight fooltangios

[gdjiveturkey]

you said his future self... that is the future!unless its just some random guy at the same time

[skoobz]

i quote "which is no longer himself, but another person. perhaps who he images what he would look like as an older person"