king of konfusion

[skorch0matik]

far into the galaxy
he gazed.
konfused,
again,
he thought.
or he thought he thought
but wasn't
certain
because
the crowds that did swirl
around him
again
konfused.
he gazed
far into the galaxy

Comments

[feebsicle]

i like this!!

[skorch0matik]

now i wonder if it is too structured to be about the idea of confusion...? but thank you