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skumg33k

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Jul 25, 2004 21:44

I need for the words to flow uninhibited from my fingertips to the keyboard and onto the little box on the screen. I need to forget all about punctuation and alliteration and grammar because the best things can be said in a run on sentence. I need to feel more than white noise and velcro emotions. I can't think. Like that lyric 'synapses they ( Read more... )

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HEAVY... termitesgraffix July 25 2004, 19:40:31 UTC

I heard a beat with that...

Re: HEAVY... skumg33k July 26 2004, 15:14:11 UTC

No doubt, I should write rhymes, that don't rhyme.

ak_acid July 25 2004, 21:05:30 UTC

the best things are said in run on sentences

skumg33k July 26 2004, 15:13:47 UTC

That's the truth. It just ALL COMES OUT
almost like when an MC writes a peice...it goes and goes and it doesn't matter where you throw in the comma or the semi-colon. It just happens. Even if it doesn't make sense to most people. I need that.

ak_acid July 26 2004, 16:24:31 UTC

you were born an MC

skumg33k July 29 2004, 20:55:36 UTC

Here you go.

Yo Yo Yo
My name is Mo
never had the skill to flow.

That's my rhyme.
Do you have one?

now samurailuci July 26 2004, 06:29:08 UTC

i think you wrote something substantial. you are alive. you are expressing yourself here.

i hear you saying that you feel inhibited, that you want to express yourself without worrying about following rules and formatting your thoughts. maybe i'm reading too much in here, but i think i hear you saying that you are feeling things that don't seem to reach to your core, and you want to reach that core.

Re: now skumg33k July 26 2004, 15:12:47 UTC

It didn't feel 'right' though. I could have described this feeling in much more detail. Since I don't know exactly HOW i'm feeling it's difficult to find the words, so I need to reach the core of the matter. You're right. It'll happen. I'm just too un-motivated.