Comments | skutner613: Ache

skutner613

Ache

Apr 16, 2010 08:45

Title: Ache
Pairing: Yunho/Jaejoong
Rated NC-17
Summary: They've been far away for far too long.
A/N: For jaeyunshii. I hope this is at least somewhat what you wanted :/

( You should try to keep quiet hyung, you wouldn't want Yoochun to barge in here right? )

rating: nc-17, !dbsk, one shot, pairing: yunho/jaejoong

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skutner613 April 22 2010, 13:26:55 UTC

Yeah, it was my first time writing smut
I was hecka nervous, hence it was short *dies*

Glad you liked it anyway though :D

bexy31 April 16 2010, 18:31:30 UTC

Ha ha ha, Changmin went to get his stomach pumped... Bless him XP

That was really good! :D I very much enjoyed it! ^-^ You should definately do something like it again! Twas funny and sexy and sweet, and just really good! ^-^

Thank you for writing/sharing :D

skutner613 April 22 2010, 13:27:47 UTC

Oh thank you so very much for reading :DD

queenlucifer April 16 2010, 18:58:46 UTC

lol very hot!! ^^
And JJ n Yunnie...bathroom...*nose bleed*
Really njoyed reading it!

skutner613 April 22 2010, 13:28:21 UTC

IDK why, the bathroom seemed
so fitting in that moment XD

Thanks for reading ^^

kikwang_luv April 16 2010, 19:10:06 UTC

No it's not FAIL at all!
I really loved it and totally enjoyed reading it.
I started cracking up when I read this: "I told him that the kimbap had gotten you sick. He left saying something about getting his stomach pumped." lol XD
I am totally imagining Changmin right now... keke~

Thank you so much for writing this! <3333

skutner613 April 22 2010, 13:29:16 UTC

Since it was my first time writing
anything like this, I thought it was
total fail

Glad to see you liked it though
Thanks for reading :D

r_1353 April 16 2010, 20:15:46 UTC

SPOT!
BRB!