Can't Get It Out of My Head

[skwantz]

I go to bed early and sleep well and wake at four forty-five, for an hour of silence.  I never want to get out of bed then, and every morning I know I can sleep for another four hours, and still not fail at any of my duties. But I get up, so have come to believe my life can be seen in miniature in that struggle in the dark of the morning. While

Comments

[zakablade]

a nice meditative quality here... the beginnings of a decent essay or other whatever named non-fiction type thing they have... 1st 3 paragraphs are pretty solid, the 4th loses steam, mainly due to the listing, but whatever...
doubt you wanted a critique, but there you go...
i like lots of shit that i should be (and sometimes am) embarrassed for liking... hurrah