Fic: Friends, Lovers, Enemies 1/?

[sky_ciel]

Summary: One year ago, Lavi was kidnapped by a Noah for losing in a battle. Now, Kanda is determined to find him back. But Lavi has no recollection of his past. Worse, he is now a Noah.
Rating: T
Pairing: LaviYuu
Genre: Character death, hurt, romance
Warning(s):
- Character death (already mentioned - A very similar plot to the DGM doujin Shadow of the

Comments

[anonymous]

awww a special message for me at the end! >D

I LOVE THE STORY~~~ yuuvi is just too sweet! XDDD i liked the part when lavi tied his scarf onto yuu's tummy. SO SWEET OHMYGOD. it's so sweet i think i may die. :DDD okay anyways, your command of english is super good, as usual. and i love your use of vocab! XD to me there are no bad points at all lah. im not a very good critic btw. just a few typos here and there you might want to edit. XD

OVERALL IT'S SUPER GOOD. XDDD

yay love you lots lauren! <333
-melo-

[sky_ciel]

typos?!? where???

[konayuki_winter]

Yay I've read the first chapter of this :)!

I freaking love the last line, so sweet! And I'm a sucker for Lavi being Kanda's "that person". This story is pretty intense, and the plot seems like it will get even more interesting :D!

[sky_ciel]

XD;; who isn't? I like to think that way too >8D Kanda should so totally be whacked for not knowing t-- *shot*

*cough* so anyway, thanks~