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Challenge 07/LB - Kary

Aug 17, 2008 14:02

So I saw pensnest's post about the community and the challenge and I figured I'd give it a shot.

( Use Is the Closest You'll Get to What You Want )

lb, 07, challenge

Comments 8

msktrnanny August 17 2008, 20:08:20 UTC

Dude. That's a mess! Now I really want to see the rest to see exactly what this all means for JC and Chris.

musicboxgirl August 17 2008, 20:25:49 UTC

For a second I thought you meant that my writing was a mess and I was like o.O . . . Oh because I thought it wasn't that bad but then I realized you meant the relationship (I hope lol) and yes it's a mess. The story it's a companion to is through Justin's POV so you don't really get to see much of the TrickC interaction.

msktrnanny August 17 2008, 20:29:25 UTC

Holy Smoking Cows! I totally meant the relationship! [my bad] the writing is fine! I particularly like that there isn't a lot of superfluous words here, really sets a tone! I'm still eager to see what the rest is... even told through Justin's POV the feelings JC's bottled up there have got to bleed into how he acts all the time!

musicboxgirl August 17 2008, 21:01:31 UTC

No worries. If you had been talking about my writing it would have been fine because critique is good to get. :)

I still have something like 8 or 9 older stories to post and then I'll start working on posting Utility.

turps33 August 18 2008, 10:42:28 UTC

Oh no, don't leave Chris!

meep

I'm with KC, I'm interested to see where it's going.

musicboxgirl September 1 2008, 03:15:52 UTC

I need to finish up the companion story so you all can see where it goes.

pensnest August 31 2008, 20:01:26 UTC

That seems a lot more *real* than so many sex scenes where everybody is perfectly co-ordinated and running in parallel! Cool stuff.

musicboxgirl September 1 2008, 03:15:05 UTC

Thanks :D When sex is good it's good but what about when sex is mediocre at best? It happens. JC can tell you all about it. *grin*