Title: show me how you (make it) glow
Fandom: X Factor 2010 RPS
Pairing: Niall Horan/Zayn Malik
Rating: PG-ish
Summary: AU. Niall marks the milestones in his and Zayn’s relationship.
Word Count: ~1,200
Disclaimer: Didn’t happen in the real world.
Notes: This is pretty fucking weird, with absolutely no explanation for the weirdness, and sort of
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Anyway, I loved this. I'll admit that it wasn't a pairing I'd thought about, but Zayn is the most confusing of them all (except maybe for Louis. Or Harry) and this was really nice, sweet and deep and quietly aching.
Loved it.
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And yours is I think the best fanfic in the 1D fandom (which needs MORE FANFIC, goddamnit), especially now that papperclipbitch has disappeared from the circulation, so you deserve it!
Cheers!
(PS: Lovely icon. Makes me smile every time I look at it. OH, HARRY.)
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I was thinking these day that I never found like a fic that I totally agree with the way the Zayn is portrayed, but you really captured the essence of it. At least, the way that I see him.
I love the way you developed the story.
Starting with one giving his opinion, revealing his feelings about the other and also putting a word to summarize it (the first part was Polite Exterior ) and then continues with the scene itself, the interaction between them.
And each "paragraph" the word that summed up where the relationship is going, changes. Polite Exterior - Appraising - familiarity...
They go for walks sometimes, and speak in abstract shapes and colours, just letting themselves exist for a while. Niall stops hearing and seeing. He tastes and he feels his way through those walks Oh, this part is my favorite, I think summarize this fic, like it is some fragile beauty that you really have to feel to understand. OMG, I don't even know ( ... )
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