I approve of Harry's appropriately girly handwriting and just about every other single thing in this fic. I LOVE the notes, they add real detail and texture to the story.
I love that you took something as mundane as food shopping (which I despise) and made it sweet and romantic and interesting. I love this story!!
Thank you so much! Finding appropriate fonts was a lot of fun, Harry's was easy, bless him :'D I'm so happy the notes worked for you too. I hate food shopping as well, analysing lists is how I keep myself entertained, haha. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! ♥
Yay, thank you bb! :D Harry's handwriting cracks me up, it was fun to be able to include it. I'm so happy the different pairings worked for you, I know they're a bit off the wall. I definitely intended Harry to be happy with his odd arrangement, even if it was sort of temporary. I feel like I could have explored it more idk, maybe in another fic! I'm so glad you liked it ♥
I love how something as seemingly non-consequential as shopping lists can show the level of intimacy between people. An absolutely lovely idea.
I love Liam and Harry being best mates and Liam still not quite getting that Harry is content where he is, even if it's not in a relationship. I really loved that about Harry too, the "I love everyone and I don't need to be in love right now" attitude. You brought that across very realistically, I thought.
You brought the entire group together in a really creative way, I thought (love that Belle Amie are Harry's flatmates and that Niall and Zayn are best friends) and just... this was absolutely wonderful from start to finish. Definitely one of the best things this fandom has seen.
It fascinates me how daily things like shopping can be very telling, so I'm really glad it came across and that it worked for you. Also that Harry's attitude made sense. And - wow, thank you so, so much. I don't even know what to say to that. I'm so happy you enjoyed it ♥♥♥
OKAY, I LOVE THIS MORE THAN SHOULD BE PHYSICALLY POSSIBLE. Everything from the shopping lists and Niall using pig latin because he couldn't just write condoms to the domesticity of the shopping to the insecurities is just wonderful. Your Liam and Louis are just lovely, and your Niall gave me heart eyes. I was so nervous - for both Harry and Niall mostly - but I love that Niall got his happy ending (and, girl, you had me happily reading Niall/Zayn; this is a feat of epic proportions!) and that Harry's got his happy right now.
Everything about this is amazing and shiny and perfect. ♥ ♥ ♥
:D I AM GRINNING SO HARD RN. Thank you! I'm so happy you liked it. (And that you spotted the pig latin, oh god I'd forgotten that :D) And I'm glad you liked Zayn for the duration of the fic! irl!Zayn is inconsistent for me. I loved writing him as how I think he should be; more gay and less douchey.
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I love that you took something as mundane as food shopping (which I despise) and made it sweet and romantic and interesting. I love this story!!
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I love Liam and Harry being best mates and Liam still not quite getting that Harry is content where he is, even if it's not in a relationship. I really loved that about Harry too, the "I love everyone and I don't need to be in love right now" attitude. You brought that across very realistically, I thought.
You brought the entire group together in a really creative way, I thought (love that Belle Amie are Harry's flatmates and that Niall and Zayn are best friends) and just... this was absolutely wonderful from start to finish. Definitely one of the best things this fandom has seen.
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Everything about this is amazing and shiny and perfect. ♥ ♥ ♥
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Thank you so much ♥
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This was absolutly amazing.
Your writing is flawless and this was really original.
I really loved Niall/Zayn in this.
Amazing job!
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