#26 - Tears

Apr 26, 2007 21:30

Title : Tears
Rating : G
Word Count : 693 (simple little drabble!)
Summary : Crying!Holmes and Silly!Fic

I've had this one finished for a while now, and finally decided to fix it up a bit and post it. Enjoy!

This is #26 of the 100 Challenge I'm still working away at.

Tears

For the third night in a row, Holmes paced restlessly around our rooms, a hand ( Read more... )

100 challenge, holmes

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snarry_fan7 April 27 2007, 02:24:54 UTC
I love how it started and then the hurt/comfort aspect. The ending was great; Holmes' reason for crying was excellent. Wonderful work!~Sophia

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skylockee April 27 2007, 03:42:26 UTC
Thankies! :D

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sherlock2040 April 27 2007, 02:54:43 UTC
Aww poor Holmes, he bit his tongue!

Good Watson for providing comfort! *pets*

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skylockee April 27 2007, 03:26:41 UTC
I always had the idea that Holmes' mouth had trouble keeping up with his mind, and with that you'd either get a slur of words from him or he'd bite his tongue. :D

Watson's so caring. <3 He's a dear!

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sherlock2040 April 27 2007, 04:17:53 UTC
That must be quite infuriating for Watson after awhile, he'd either have to get Holmes to repeat things or be forever treating him for biting his tongue!

Love the mental image of garbled!Holmes!

Watson: Cup of tea?
Holmes: afkanfioahfafmaffanfiafh.
Watson: ...
Holmes: *cough* sorry, yes please.

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skylockee April 27 2007, 04:49:29 UTC
Oh god. *dies* That made my night. XD

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howahoai April 27 2007, 11:13:22 UTC
lmao~
it ended so dramatic!!lol
but ironic as well.:) seems holmes'll never expose his emotion anyway.but it is holmes.:)

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skylockee April 27 2007, 14:50:07 UTC
Indeed. :D It reminded me of that challenge Holmesslash had a few months back on "Making Holmes Cry". XD

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liederlady221b April 28 2007, 01:51:50 UTC
I stared quietly at Holmes, finally realizing that the tears I had saw did not originate from any deeper emotion at all.

This made me sniffle...poor Watson.

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skylockee April 28 2007, 02:03:22 UTC
It is almost as if Watson was hoping that Holmes -was- crying. It'd be a step for Holmes in showing a bit more emotion.

Poor Watson, perhaps some other day!

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deadfairytaler June 1 2009, 14:23:20 UTC
lol poor doctor

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