Comments | skysongma: Colorless (Section Thirty-Seven)

skysongma

Colorless (Section Thirty-Seven)

Oct 08, 2009 15:27

( The Hunter )

fantasy, jones, original fiction, colorless

Comments 6

_profiterole_ October 8 2009, 21:20:20 UTC

Yayayay! And all is revealed!

Ben, sweetie, I'm not sure knocking out your boyfriend was necessary.

skysongma October 8 2009, 22:45:48 UTC

It's so he doesn't get himself hurt... Andy can't shapeshift when he wants yet, remember.

...Also, Ben is just not very good at thinking under pressure.

ocotillo_dawn October 9 2009, 04:17:50 UTC

just want to say I started lurking on this a couple weeks ago. Am enjoying.

Don't usually like high school stories (prefer older protags, a harder edge, and schoolday angst is too far beyond me), but you write well, very carefully and precisely, and the plot is fun and off the beaten path. So you've pulled in someone who isn't part of your 'natural audience' via the strength of your writing.

Just sayin'. :) Thanks.

skysongma October 9 2009, 12:22:44 UTC

Why thank you. :) I prefer that the high school setting be just a setting, not the entire driving force for the plot.

charisstoma October 9 2009, 22:29:08 UTC

EEEEEeeeeeeee! This was wonderful.*runs off to the next chapter*

princesssoccer October 10 2009, 13:38:54 UTC

Oh. My. (Not existing?) God.
I am... I have no words for this. God, I have to read the next chapter RIGHT AWAY!