Can't Let You Go (One-shot)

Jan 28, 2009 20:41


Title: Can’t Let You Go
Author: skytears9
Fandom:Hey! Say! JUMP
Genre: Romance, Angst, and Drama.
Pairings: Hikabu (Hikaru x Yabu)
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1683
Summary:Hikaru and Yabu were always viewed as the ideal couple amongst the juniors and senpais of the jimusho. But what could be Yabu’s reason for suddenly breaking up with Hikaru?
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hikabu, yaotome hikaru, fanfiction, yabu kota

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bachiari January 29 2009, 06:29:40 UTC
so very beautiful ♥
you described the pairing very well >> makes me want to read more but its FINALS week so i better get back to studying
i love your writing style though ><
you described the emotions very well and it made my heart ache
oh johnny ;[ it always seemed like you were such a yaoi fan haha

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skytears9 January 29 2009, 16:39:11 UTC
LOL. I'm sorry if my fanfic distracted you from your homework. XD

But thanks so much for reading and leaving such a great comment! I'm glad you liked it!

And I know, right? With so many junior boys running around and member ai-filled sempais, one would have assumed that Johnny-san is a yaoi fan. ROFL.

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bachiari January 29 2009, 23:00:07 UTC
IT'S OKAY IF IT DISCTRACTED ME XDDD
MY TEST WAS ACTUALLY PRETTY EASY :]]]

aww i think my commenting skills are rusty though :O haven't read a lot of fics in a long long long time

and yes LMAO im convinced that one day JE will turn into a pron industry HAHAHA

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skytears9 January 30 2009, 16:00:05 UTC
Yayy~! :)

Oh, it's ok. Your comment was just fine. :D

ROFL. I think it already is. I mean with all the little boys dressed in glitter and dancing/playing with older boys. XD

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skytears9 January 29 2009, 16:37:48 UTC
Yes, sadness. D: haha

Thanks for reading and commenting! I'm glad you liked it!

Kyaaa! OTP~♥♥ XD

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stevenica January 29 2009, 10:34:12 UTC
This is one of the best YabuHika ficss I've read so far!
*screams* & send u huggies + Chu=3=***
It's amazing coz you'd put in so much detail which reflects the reality. It feels so real and you also depicted their emotions & feelings so well~
Aw, and I can see you DO understand YABUHIKA's relationship & their characters!
I can't express in words how much I appreciate this piece of fine work~! 'coz for many YabuHika fics out there, even they hv nice plots, they always contains some misunderstandings of how the REAL YabuHika are.
SO I'm very very thankful grateful to you!
You're great~ You'd written beautifully my ideal close-to-reality YabuHika's roles & feelings~
I LUV U ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ THX <3
P.S.I was so sad & nearly cried with the Hika in your fic tho >_< Let me wipe away Hika's tears...
The ending is lovely (hatto)

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skytears9 January 29 2009, 16:47:36 UTC
Wow. That is the most flattering comment I have ever gotten. You have certainly made my day with your comment! Thank youuuu! *HUGS BACK* :DD

You're so sweet, ILU, too. ♥ haha I'm really glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading!!

P.S. Aww, please don't cry! XD

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karmoisin January 29 2009, 12:30:55 UTC
This was so beautiful! I loved it, adding to my memories. <3

There was a great sense of seriousness and desperation in Hikaru’s eyes as he said, “Then let me explain to you how much I love you.”

I think I pretty much died at this part. Aaaaaa. ♥

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skytears9 January 29 2009, 18:12:04 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! But Yabu and Hikaru are the ones who are beautiful.

Eh? Your memories? Sankyuuu~♥. XD

Uwaahhh, really? Don't die! LOL. Thanks so much for reading and commenting! :D

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skytears9 January 29 2009, 18:14:47 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and commenting!

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