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Hiding and Seeking -- House/Cuddy

Jan 25, 2007 02:28

TITLE: Hiding and Seeking
PAIRING: House/Cuddy, non-sexual.
RATING: PG-13
WORD COUNT: 1,663
SUMMARY: House finds Cuddy hiding under her desk. Cuddy has a moment of weakness, and House lets her keep it.
DISCLAIMER: Do not own.
NOTE: Cuddy is such a strong woman, n'est pas? Surely, she has to have a few cracks sometime. Probably tiny little blips ( Read more... )

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Comments 16

finmagik January 25 2007, 22:15:10 UTC

I really enjoyed this fanfic, in character and very well done.

skyvehicle January 27 2007, 17:19:40 UTC

Thank you!

unifilar January 26 2007, 02:07:31 UTC

Um, wait. This was beyond awesome.

You ease the reader into the story perfectly, starting off with intriguing symbolism and great sentence structure. I love the little tidbits of detail that you take care to insert; it makes the reading all the more enriched. The dialogue is nigh-flawless, flowing, witty, and in-character for both Cuddy and House. I also adore the present/future tense you used- so original and brilliantly utilized. I love the whole plot, that Cuddy needs her moment to just break down. Gah. This fanfic is just so good. I can't stop reading it. Wonderful job. Keep it up.

skyvehicle January 27 2007, 19:32:16 UTC

I'm glad that you liked the tense switching. I wasn't sure if it would come off as me just being sloppy. Thanks so much.

bmax67 January 27 2007, 04:06:48 UTC

Loved the dialogue. House was spot on. Great line about squeezing a mini person out of her vagina. :D

Great visual of House climbing under the desk to sit with her. Too cute.

skyvehicle January 27 2007, 19:37:51 UTC

Any excuse for House to sit down or something, I guess. And thanks about that. I think the babies and vaginas line is my favorite one.