LJ Idol Week 6: Step on a Crack

Apr 21, 2014 18:01

LJ Idol Week 6 Entry
Topic: Step on a crack
Trigger warning: Discussion of major violence

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halfshellvenus April 24 2014, 05:48:44 UTC
Such a sad and soulful entry on such a tragic incident. Reading this, I really feel for this woman I didn't know and for all she was and might have been.

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slammerkinbabe April 25 2014, 00:14:45 UTC
Thanks so much. She really was lovely.

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i_17bingo April 24 2014, 12:27:06 UTC
This really got to me. She could have been having the best night of her life, and it only takes one moment to end that. Wow.

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slammerkinbabe April 25 2014, 00:03:48 UTC
I know, right? It's unbelievable. It was so horribly shocking.

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penpusher April 24 2014, 12:59:42 UTC
An astonishing account and your feelings about it. I do remember hearing about the case and thinking how senseless and horrible it all seemed, based on the media stories, but this takes it to that personal level that isn't shown on the 11 o'clock news.

RIP Imette.

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slammerkinbabe April 25 2014, 00:16:54 UTC
Thanks so much. It was so strange to see the story everywhere, and people often writing things that had nothing to do with who she was. I'm glad you felt this brought something personal to it.

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violaconspiracy April 24 2014, 18:32:56 UTC
Ok, you made me cry actual, physical tears into my bowl of soup. Nice going.
Truthfully, I like your crack theory better than the traditional theories, too. The way you tie it in with deja vu experiences makes it entirely believable.

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slammerkinbabe April 25 2014, 00:03:07 UTC
Thank you, although I'm sorry I made you cry! (That's always the tough thing about writing something emotional, if I do it right it makes people cry and then I feel bad! Sheesh) Also, I'm glad the tie-in to deja vu makes sense to you. I like that a lot of people have commented to say the theory makes sense to them. It sort of reinforces my feeling that it could be real.

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dreamsreflected April 24 2014, 22:47:54 UTC
this is very powerful writing.

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slammerkinbabe April 25 2014, 00:01:47 UTC
Thanks so much. (Also, love your icon. Rainbow socks!)

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