LJ Idol Week 8: "Yes, and"

[slammerkinbabe]

LJ Idol Week 8
Topic: "Yes, and"
Keywords: dialogue, marital disharmony, hole-digging, fiction
Rating: R-rated for sexual references and a few incidences of Very Bad Language

Comments

[law_nerd]

Excellent (says the family lawyer).

[slammerkinbabe]

Ha! I imagine you see stuff like this with some frequency? Which is sad...

[nelc]

Ouch!

[slammerkinbabe]

Yeah, he's not the nicest guy in the world. :) Or the smartest. I guess she was feeling rebellious when she went looking for a rough-edged guy to marry, but she maybe didn't make the best choice...

[rolypolypony]

Whew!!

[slammerkinbabe]

Whew for her dumping him, or whew, that was an unfortunate conversation? :)

[rolypolypony]

Both! :) Loved this! :)

[slammerkinbabe]

Yay! Thank you!

[eternal_ot]

Ah! YES..what a woman wants...interesting take...liked how it went!

[slammerkinbabe]

Thanks so much! :)

[karmasoup]

Wow. I wish confessions were always that easy... staring at a drunk guy... that's a tactic that should be taught at the academy! This is great!

[slammerkinbabe]

LOL! Who knows? Maybe it would be super effective even on people who aren't drunk! :) Thank you!