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May 19, 2014 19:57

LJ Idol Week 9 ( Read more... )

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solstice_singer May 20 2014, 02:02:42 UTC
This was really good. It was sad, but well-written. Great job.

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slammerkinbabe May 20 2014, 14:19:30 UTC
Thanks so much! :)

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kagomeshuko May 20 2014, 03:25:06 UTC
Interesting take on the topic.

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slammerkinbabe May 20 2014, 14:19:38 UTC
Thanks!

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icaruslived May 20 2014, 19:38:36 UTC
Oh, I really loved this one. The character writing was great, and talking about how overuse of a meme - originally used for the power it had to change minds - can lead to it just dying a feeble, whimpering death.

This was great. Thank you!

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slammerkinbabe May 22 2014, 00:15:59 UTC
Oh, thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked the characters, and it is really sad how something that was meant to be powerfully good could turn into something as inane/offensive as what it wound up being, so I'm glad you felt that worked. :) Thanks for commenting, it made me happy!

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unmowngrass May 21 2014, 00:35:27 UTC
Oh, you set the scene perfectly here, I was hooked all the way through this.

Small point of order, though: Although most times you've used the spelling Ann, there's once near the beginning that's Anne - typo?

Love the take on the prompt though!

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slammerkinbabe May 22 2014, 00:16:28 UTC
Oh, thanks so much! I'm so glad it kept you hooked. And, yes, that's totally a typo. Thanks for calling it to my attention!

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eternal_ot May 21 2014, 13:05:52 UTC
Excellent take on the prompt...loved how you blended reality with fiction...A good read and job well done! Kudos!

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slammerkinbabe May 22 2014, 00:17:53 UTC
Thank you so much for this! I'm really glad that you liked the blending of reality and fiction (and glad the slight twist with the history of the poster was OK by you), and I was worried that it might not be a tight/compelling read, so thanks for that. :)

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