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[slammerkinbabe]

LJ Idol Week 13

Topic: Open topic
Keywords: fiction, teen, bullying, suicide, gossip, pastiche, dialogue, newspaper article, people being assholes
Triggers: attempted suicide, homophobia, bullying
Notes: This is part of something I'm hoping to make into a longer work. I've had some trouble getting motivated on it so I decided to use "open topic"

Comments

[roina_arwen]

Great job with the interview dialogue, it totally sounds like self-absorbed teens to me.

[slammerkinbabe]

Thanks so much! :)

[sinnamongirl]

Yeah, *amazing* job with the dialog! Took me back to high school, actually.

[tatdatcm]

You really captured the teenage voice in this. It's especially sad that they don't even realize they were bullying, and continued to do so.

[slammerkinbabe]

Thanks! Yeah, it's really sad how unaware some teens are of how cruel their behavior can be.

[kickthehobbit]

I have to agree with the other commenters-you really nail the teenage voice in this.

[slammerkinbabe]

Thanks so much, I'm glad you think so! :D

[eternal_ot]

Good work! you captured the essence really well...well written indeed!

[kajel]

Nicely done.