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[lover_of_anime]

When you turn twenty-one the American way is to become an alcoholic liaison

Comments

[chaoward]

i like the way you built up onto a rythmic canter towards the end; excellent 'coming of age' and the realization of what nonsense it all is. graphic and visceral; good read

[deederann]

awesome... but i guess i don't really need to say that, you wouldn't post this if you didn't already know that right?
i've written so many poems about the disillusionment of the american dream but i think yours touches a place i never could have dreamed of touching. the way your gait flows is unique and refreshing...very intense and it's one of those that i would pay to see performed. :)