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[slapstickhero]

█ ✫ INSIDE OUT ··· ( ch 3 of ? )
█ pairing: jongkey, minkey
█ rating: NC-17 (This chapter rated PG)
█ genre: drama - romance

✫ ··· chapter index
Chapter One
Chapter Two

Comments

[lunathunderhead]

How. Did. I. Miss. Chapter. Two. Omg going to read.

Just being a spot whore for now though (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧

[lunathunderhead]

Well. You had me at your impeccable command of the English language, pretty much.

Otherwise! The Christmas scene with the singing snowman and the reindeer, that was a really nice touch. It's probably not what goes down normally in their dorm, but whatever--it was cute and subtle and nice. I loved it.

Minho is such a gentleman, omg??? He is practically the epitome of quiet chivalry, and you write it with so much finesse, flails. Not many can actually get Minho across as simultaneously taciturn and gallant without making him sound like an asshole 90% of the time, so...atm I am loving Minho.

In the end, keyboard smash, I haven't read a fic in general, not only circumscribed to SHINee and/or Jongkey, in a very long time. I'm so looking forward to this omg!!!

Have some more emoji abuse, they convey my feelings so perfectly. Also I haven't written a comment this long for months, so that's also emoji worthy!

╮(◕▽◕)╭ ☆彡 (⌒▽⌒) ╮(◕▽◕)╭ ☆彡

[slapstickhero]

LOL Those emotes are adorable, oh my God.

; __ ; It really does mean a lot to me that you're enjoying this, especially if you haven't read fanfics in a while. Thank you so much!

[lovestrucksmile]

spot

[lovestrucksmile]

so basically i planned to write my whole comment on the scene between key and minho while they stare out over the city and then i saw that there was more and proceeded to freak out because my feeble mind can barely process all this brilliance.

first off, i am completely blown away and astounded by all the emotions you manage to pack into this story; hell, even if it's a repetition of emotion at times you make it seem fresh, and just as hurtful as the first and always manage to make the reader understand it in new ways.

the scene between key and minho is utterly brilliant. tbh, i was feeling pretty lame reading that because the amount of life experience you have in comparison to me makes me feel like a fetus. lmao. it's a love/hate relationship with your genius but i learn so much whenever i read something of yours/talk to you! ♥

also~ very clever that key is captivated by minho's hidden feelings. and when you said this Key's mind is buzzing with new questions about the man next to him, his curiosity getting the better of his

[slapstickhero]

A FETUS. A FETUS. I LAUGHED SO HARD IRL. LIKE, LEGIT TEARS FELL.

fkalfsfiofgds All this praise. I feel so unworthy of it. ; __ ;

Jjong plays a pivotal role in the story itself - he just hasn't had a chance yet. He's not stirring Key's emotional pot for no reason. Like Minho said, the world isn't black and white, and there are more shades of grey than anyone cares to imagine, or admit.

ALL SHALL BE REVEALED IN TIME~

[melalocket]

Omg this is getting more interesting!!
I wonder how long Minho can hold his feeling towards kibumieee >w<

I hope jjong and kibumie can finish their thing with good...
Kibumie can't you see Minho??

[slapstickhero]

The Minho is a strong-willed character in this fic, but no one has limitless strength!

As for JongKey, only time - and possibly the next chapter - will tell. n ▽ n~

Thank you for reading! ❤

[fantasydesire]

TT______TT

whatever Minho said : true dat. been there. done that. felt that. not gonna go there again.. ><"

[slapstickhero]

Yes, this Minho knows the pains of unrequited love all too well. He's living them!

Thank you so much for reading! ; __ ;

[slapstickhero]

Thank you so much for the compliments! TT △ TT This fic is slowly becoming my baby, so it means a lot to me that you're looking forward to more!