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Jul 25, 2011 17:09

█ ✫ INSTINCT ··· ( oneshot )
█ pairing: 2min
█ rating: NC-17 (WARNING: Adult Content)
█ genre: PWP, Smut

█ summary:
Minho had somehow always known that Taemin was different when he was dancing. Now, however, he was absolutely certain of it.

✫ ··· author's note:
This fic is a monster. I was intending around 4-5k words, but I doubled my target. I couldn't ( Read more... )

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slapstickhero July 25 2011, 21:17:33 UTC
█ ✫ Spot for lovestrucksmile

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lovestrucksmile August 1 2011, 23:59:52 UTC

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slapstickhero August 2 2011, 05:37:01 UTC
Yeah, you know all that descriptive flexing was your you. (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧

I will continue to consider your side story request. I sort of even have a scenario in mind for it. I have other things to finish first, though! xD

❤❤

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slapstickhero July 25 2011, 21:18:25 UTC
█ ✫ Spot for onsooni

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rudyard July 26 2011, 10:59:51 UTC
FUCKING SCREAMING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IDK WHERE TO START! I want to quote parts that I like but I like the whole damn story ;~;
Okay but I really liked the pole dancing part that was hot, like 1st degree burns hot!!!!!!!! Skwbjskahjaokskwnw
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Amazing as always! You are just perfect ! Lmao even though this took me a long ass time to read because I wanted to soak in all the details so I didn't miss anything.
This was perfect.
IDE ship 2min, damn!
Got me keysmashing in Korean ㅓ쥬저ㅏ다ㅏ미ㅣㅐㅍ디메ㅗ듀. LMAO.
Love you :3

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slapstickhero July 26 2011, 23:49:37 UTC
I'M GLAD YOU LIKE ITTTTTTT~

Also glad you read it even though it's 2Min~ ❤❤

The pole dancing part gave me succcccch a hard time. I was watching vids on YouTube, trying to figure out how to explain what was going on without being confusing. It went through a few drafts before I got it readable. xD

Thank you bb!

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artificiallilac July 25 2011, 21:56:08 UTC
I love you. Omg, I fucking love you.
This was a freaking work of fucking art.

I swear, I haven't read something so hot in forever--I am so incoherent right now!
I love the way you write, how your words flow together and how manage to make everything so dlakjgfjafhkdj. I'm going to go to hell for this, omg, I am going to read this over again until I feel completely satisfied.

Taemin on the pole--you detailed it so well, I could vividly see it in my head, the detail put into that was astounding, really.

And then Minho getting all frustrated from it, I don't blame him, I was too! >.<

How you detailed them having sex omg, it was so freaking realistic, how is that even possible? ;______; I felt like I was actually there. Like, I was the table or something omg.

Thank you so much for sharing! :)

Canijustkeepthisstoryforeveromgwhyareyousobrilliantandperfectwhy?

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slapstickhero July 27 2011, 00:09:15 UTC
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This comment is too flattering I don't even -

Thank you so much! I was really nervous about writing this - onsooni and lovestrucksmile were really the only reasons I ever finished it - so thank them, too, for making me share it! lol~

Your comment means a lot to me, so thank you, as well! A thousand thank-you's!

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debsk July 26 2011, 01:03:34 UTC
This is like Lucifer!Taemin all over again.

OMG! I stumbled upon the fic only with pure curiosity but... seriously, I'm completely asdfdsdfsdf with the images you were able to conjure on my mind. Everything was so vivid!! I'm blown away and my coherency is nowhere near me right now!! Apart from swearing, I don't have words!!

I loved it from the first word to the last. Minho is perfect, Taemin is sly and just so adsdffd!! Seriously, no words to describe how much I liked their characterization!! And what happens and how it happens and OMG! I had been so long since the last time I read something that left me in this no-brain state!!

Even Key, Onew and Jonghyun were great in the few lines they had!

Thank you so much for sharing!

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slapstickhero July 27 2011, 00:27:53 UTC
Swearing is good! I swear a lot myself, so~

lovestrucksmile has requested a side story with Key and his mystery man, and I'm seriously considering doing it one day. I have other things to work on first, though!

Thanks so much for reading! ❤

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a_life_defiant July 26 2011, 20:33:09 UTC
I loved this! The attention to details here was really amazing. I was thoroughly immersed in the story & setting.

Really well done bb.



p.s. I adore that Guetta was one of the links. His shit is magic & that was a perfect song for the scene IMO. ^^

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slapstickhero July 27 2011, 00:25:52 UTC
I LOVE DAVID GUETTA.

I just do. *____*

Thank you so much for reading!

And for loving Guetta, too!

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