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Aug 13, 2011 19:14

█ ✫ TWO IF BY SEA ··· ( oneshot )
█ pairing: Jongkey
█ rating: PG-13 (WARNING: Implied Suicide)
█ genre: AU, Tragedy, Angst

█ summary:
Jonghyun makes one last request. Key will follow him anywhere.

✫ ··· author's note:
I was in a strange, strange mood when I wrote this. It doesn't entirely make sense, but it's out, bool, the end. This could be called a ( Read more... )

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slapstickhero August 13 2011, 23:19:12 UTC
█ ✫ spot for lovestrucksmile

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lovestrucksmile August 14 2011, 06:03:21 UTC
hdjsfhudjfhjkdahfjdhafjkshjkafhjasfh!


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slapstickhero August 15 2011, 23:02:50 UTC
THANK YOU BB
(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧*:・゚✧*:・゚✧*:・゚✧*:・゚✧*:・゚✧*:・゚✧*:・゚✧

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slapstickhero August 13 2011, 23:19:23 UTC
█ ✫ spot for onsooni

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rudyard August 15 2011, 19:09:09 UTC
you were complaining on skype on how pretentious this was but then i told you that this was a good type of pretentious and it truly is.

i tell you all the time how i envy your writing skills, but you've been in the writing game...for a really long time LOL so it is understandable.

whether you think this is so so or not, this is really beautiful. your detailing is just off the charts and the way you were things.

your intelligence and writing skill turns me on, noona LMAO.

i loved this!

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slapstickhero August 15 2011, 23:03:32 UTC
I think it'll always be a little too pretentious for me, buuuut I'll get over it. LOL

THANK YOU CAIBB~ *:・゚✧

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personified August 14 2011, 14:15:59 UTC
this was beautiful. heart achingly beautiful. I can't seem to get the imagery of Key with his tear stained face and red rimmed eyes, walking down into the sea, a non-existent Jonghyun holding onto his hands and both walking into the welcoming heavy sea out of my mind. thank you ;u;

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slapstickhero August 15 2011, 23:06:13 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you took something away from it.

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artificiallilac August 14 2011, 22:26:48 UTC
Thank you for this. Really. Thank you.

The complicated relationship they had and the imagery and words you used to explain it was just so beautiful and perfect.

I don't know if I'd even go and "drink the stars" if someone I truly cared about asked, but the fact that Kibum did (and felt content--no regret in doing so)is tragically precious.

Thank you so much for sharing. I'm going to keep this one with me for a while :)

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slapstickhero August 15 2011, 23:07:34 UTC
I'm with you on that one - I can't imagine tying myself to someone with that sort of intensity at all, to be honest. I'm too selfish, I think.

Thank you for reading! n__n

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artificiallilac August 16 2011, 04:09:45 UTC
You and me both! I'm definitely too selfish for something like that! I can't think about others, I always tend to put myself first! But it's amazing how even though you can't imagine yourself in a relationship that intense, you write it out so perfectly!

Looking forward for more stories written by you! :)

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peanutsparty August 15 2011, 04:51:36 UTC

The summary...ugh. Key does follow him anywhere...

I read it once, twice then thrice...somewhat pushing the words deeper than the last...making me wonder if i should go and drink the stars as well~kkk

I have weak spot for things involving stars, the sea and the moon~ just saying

*hearts*

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slapstickhero August 15 2011, 23:09:01 UTC
I have a thing for the ocean, myself. I only swam in it once, though, and even if it was fun, it was also scary and really humbling. You feel pretty small when the waves get big enough.

Thank you~

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