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[slapstickhero]

█ ✫ INSIDE OUT ··· ( ch 5 of ? )
█ pairing: jongkey, minkey
█ rating: NC-17 (This chapter rated NC-17 - WARNING: Adult Content)
█ genre: drama - romance
✫ ··· chapter index
Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four

✫ ··· author's note: This chapter took a long time to come out. Damn you, writer's block. It's a little longer than I was intending,

Comments

[mickyart]

Omg, this chapter literally drained my energy with all the emotions splayed all over. But I realized most of it spend on cheering for key's brave heart and his longing for minho. Minkey all the way!!!

[slapstickhero]

Wave them pom-poms! Minho will need your support in the next chapter.

*Cue eerie music suitable for foreshadowing*

[peanutsparty]

can i spot for myself? ~haha
i am so happy with the update...will read first thing in the morning (err...that is...later~kekeke)

[peanutsparty]

It becomes more and more difficult to disregard these dreams as they get more and more inventive, straying from fictionalized recollections and becoming fantasies in and of themselves.

sometimes one's own mind is a bitch.
Oh key...i can't imagine how broken he is already...but minho...he's the only thing that keeps him together...Key needs to face it...

and Jong...even though he is really irritatingly mean and callous to Key...part of him is broken as well but his decisions are just stupid.
He's already lost his chance.

Omo~i don't know how you'll wrap this out...i just have no idea...couldn't imagine an instance of a happy ending...there can be an "eventually" in this but...gaaah~ broken pieces even if they can be mended or fixed can never be the same.

*i love you*

this is one of the best chaptered stories i've read in recent times.

i'll be seeing them at the SG concert...:D

i might as well ask, if by chance...you are to? ^_^

[slapstickhero]

When I say it'll get better, I mean it! I promise everything will hurt far less once the end comes. It doesn't seem that way right now, but it will~

The sting will always be there, but scars fade. They remind you, but they don't anchor you. n__n

I could technically go to the SMTown NYC concert in October, but I haven't got a passport and flying down is too expensive, and cuts into my class schedule. So I can't. Sob sob sob. ; __ ;

[patzmelody01]

Dude...you need to give me a spot on the next chapter because this is amazing.

I admit to being a silent reader for the first four chapters, because eh...Jonghyun/Key pairings tend to piss me off. A LOT, which I might add.

But now that Key's slowly but surely killing the love the he once had for Jonghyun, and now that Minho has a high enough chance right now...I'm coming out and I'm hella fighting for Minkey until the end.

Jonghyun doesn't deserve Key, just like Key PROBABLY doesn't deserve Minho either. The difference between them is, Key would hurt Minho. At least, he won't mean to. And he's finally starting to feel soemthing for Minho now that he knows that he's important to him.

Gah, I really hope that this ends up as Minkey because the puppy's an ass and honestly, I won't give two shits even if he changes his goddamn attitude.

:)

[slapstickhero]

I can certainly spot you, if you like!

x3 JongKey can definitely feel overwritten, but I think it's easy to do for them since their relationship just seems to slip so naturally into a fan-fictional pattern. It's their own faults, really!

Poor Jonghyun. I'm going to have to write him as if the sun shines out of his ass when Inside Out is over, just to make up for making him look like such a colossal asshole. ; __ ; Sorry, dinoface!

[selminhee]

I really, really hope that Key doesn't end up with Jjong here. He's an ass, and I just...can't see it happening, no matter what happens later on in the story. To be completely honest.

I want Minkey's relationship to develop even more. I think that Key's in love with Minho, but he doesn't realise it just because he's been so hang up on Jonghyun for years that he finds it impossible to fall in love with anyone else. Minho's done so much for him already that I really, desperately want him to get the guy that he deserves and loves.

Please update soon!

[slapstickhero]

I don't think Jonghyun will ever be completely redeemed in this story, but I'm hoping people will at least have a morbid understanding of his thought patterns when everything is said and done.

That said, I don't blame you for rooting for his competition. There's a little more to it, though, so there aren't many roses to be found in the next chapter.

You'll have to wait and see~!

[fantasydesire]

hey. just because somebody tells you to leave them alone when they're crying doesnt mean they really want you to, jjong..
sheesh..

go minho!
^^

[slapstickhero]

Still, if Jonghyun had followed, Key probably would've shoved him in front of a bus. Or Minho would have. Either-or.

x3