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Oct 27, 2011 02:00

█ ✫ TREASURE HUNTING ··· ( oneshot )
█ pairing: Onho
█ rating: PG-13
█ genre: Romance

█ summary:
Minho collects only the finest of what Jinki has to offer.

( What he truly desires are the moans. )

Comments 26

jinkibumiminho October 28 2011, 08:38:23 UTC

[applauds and reaches for the tissue box]

Sobbing. This is so beautiful. Your choice of words to construct the imagery was so unique and evocative. I really appreciated the contrast of the public (and perhaps constructed) Onew with the private Jinki, with Minho observing it all and treasuring it.

Wonderful.

slapstickhero October 29 2011, 20:38:12 UTC

Thank you so much omg ; __ ;

I wouldn't say constructed? But it's definitely played-up, sometimes too much when they're all tired and it's harder to do. Still, it means they're trying for the fans, and I can't say I don't appreciate the effort. x3

shineeunicorn October 29 2011, 18:43:54 UTC

So beautifully written~ ;3;

slapstickhero October 29 2011, 20:38:45 UTC

Thank you so much~ T __ T

oconje October 30 2011, 15:03:54 UTC

Wow, well done on writing such a lovely, poetic and romantic piece. I really love that its Onho! This pairing is very beautiful!

slapstickhero November 7 2011, 06:41:34 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. ; __ ;

peanutsparty November 12 2011, 08:25:21 UTC

God.
It is so poignant.
It was built-up so well that when "i love you" was already said...one cannot dent the sincerity.it was unquestionable however uncertain >.<
Love reading your words.
Please keep writing. :)))))
*hearts*

slapstickhero November 28 2011, 04:52:50 UTC

; __ ;

Thank you so much! I swear I overuse this face, but it's really what I want to do when someone says stuff like this, so I can't stop.

stjoan4eva November 27 2011, 07:24:37 UTC

This was absolutely majestic, so astounding that it completely blew me away. I had to read it three times before I could even cope, and I nearly gave a standing ovation to my computer screen.

Frowns, however slight, suit him better than the smiles he plasters over top. They are graceless and foreign, stretched across his skin like a scar that begs to share its origins, though the telling is often sidestepped with all the practised skill of a pathological liar and little of the malice or cunning required to be guiltless.

I want to frame that line, oh my gosh. *_*

slapstickhero November 28 2011, 04:56:56 UTC

fdlgkndfg

Before I get to your comment, can I take a fangirl moment to say that I frigging love Camden Road? Okay there I said it eeeeeee~

Now that my psycho is out of the way, thank you so much! x /// x I don't think this deserves a standing ovation in any way, but it's ridiculously flattering to hear. I'm so happy you liked it! dfgdkgdfg