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Mar 13, 2012 21:24


█ ✫ INSIDE OUT ··· ( ch 8 of ? )
█ pairing: minkey
█ rating: NC-17
█ genre: drama - romance

✫ ··· chapter index
Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Six
Chapter Seven
Chapter Seven-A (Interlude)

✫ ··· author's note:
I'm sorry! I know this took forever to come out, and I'm really not entirely satisfied with how it ( Read more... )

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slapstickhero March 14 2012, 01:29:27 UTC
█ ✫ spot for owlus

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slapstickhero March 14 2012, 01:30:05 UTC
█ ✫ spot for patzmelody01

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patzmelody01 March 14 2012, 06:48:02 UTC
No. Key, please stop this. Kill all of your romantic feelings right now. You love Minho and all of your actions are sending him into doubt. I don't want you two to break up now that you've finally got each other. MINKEY!

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slapstickhero March 30 2012, 15:28:24 UTC
Love without obstacles is nothing but falling blindly to an abrupt and painful end.

And that's all I have to say about that.

8D

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imvus March 14 2012, 03:20:34 UTC
where do I start?

How perfect you describe Jonghyun emotional state at finally realizing what he has lost. And it's a greater lose then most since they work, eat, sleep, and live together. And as Taemin put it...that friendship was the biggest price.

I don't want to be mean and say Jonghyun deserves this but he kind of does.

I loved this part:
*** It should be Jonghyun, but it isn't Jonghyun because life isn't fair, and no matter how many times he tries to steal and take and swindle for what he wants, life always gives him exactly what he deserves. Nothing more, and nothing less.***
Because it says it all. His own selfishness has got him here and he got exactly what he deserves.

On the other hand...I am also worried (like Minho) who is wise enough to realize that there are loose ends. And if he can remain strong and himself and not let anger, jealousy and insecurities get to the best of him... I would hope that Key can see how worthy Minho has been.

sobs...( can I hug everyone now.)

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slapstickhero March 30 2012, 15:30:13 UTC
I told everyone I'd explain Jonghyun's point of view, which I haven't done, but I promise you it's coming. His current state-of-mind was more pressing to deal with.

I promise he has his reasons. They may not be logical, or any less selfish than he's already discovered he can be, but he has them and they're the only excuse he has.

All shall be revealed soon~

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imvus March 30 2012, 22:14:01 UTC
I hope you don't think that I hate your Jonghyun, I don't. I think he made a huge mistake(or bad choices)and like most people regret them afterwards. I thought you portrayed his character emotions about this whole ordeal very well. :)

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fantasydesire March 14 2012, 15:33:58 UTC
ahah!!! an update.. yeay!!
XD

oh no.. key, no.. minho will feel bad.. oh God.
><"

ps: jjong, listen to taemin. but only as BEST friends..
XD

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slapstickhero March 30 2012, 15:31:38 UTC
Yes, an update! I'm sorry they're so slow, but school is almost finished for me and then I'm hoping I'll go back to writing more consistently.

And my lips are sealed on everything else until the next chapter. :X

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jkl_401 March 14 2012, 18:14:04 UTC
Aaaaaahhhhhhh Jonghyun ruining everything and he hasnt even done anything directly
Aaaaaaggghhhhh
Thats all I can say :')

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slapstickhero March 30 2012, 15:32:37 UTC
He's a result of his own actions here, unfortunately enough for him. xD

There's a little more to it, but not yettttt~

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jkl_401 March 30 2012, 18:18:51 UTC
I have to say I'm very excited to find out ^_^

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