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Apr 17, 2012 23:33


█ ✫ INSIDE OUT ··· ( ch 9 of ? )
█ pairing: minkey
█ rating: NC-17
█ genre: drama - romance

✫ ··· chapter index
Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Six
Chapter Seven
Chapter Seven-A (Interlude)
Chapter Eight

✫ ··· author's note:
This chapter is a little shorter than normal, but I wrote it all in one sitting. I ( Read more... )

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slapstickhero April 18 2012, 03:38:13 UTC
█ ✫ spot for owlus

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owlus April 18 2012, 12:06:45 UTC
I have this horrible pounding headache and I'm on my way To school, I'm exhausted and I want to sleep for 3 years but you laura, always manage to cheer me up, you manage to put a smile on my face and I'm so happy you got your writing mojo back somewhat. You truly inspire me and as much as I was angry because I wanted jongkey to get back together, the mechanics of this fiction wouldn't let it happen. Sob, im glad that jonghyun and key has that talk. It was crucial because eventually, if They didn't talk, things would fall apart even more than it already has.

I am glad that jonghyun has had this realization I feel like he has grown up so much. I was just thinking how our friendship had started due this fic. Wow, I'm glad I'm commenting in time. This really made me happy Laura. I just love Minho here so much ;;

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slapstickhero April 24 2012, 02:34:23 UTC
Bb you knew my OTP the moment I started discussing this fic with you what would possess you to think that? Plus if Key had gotten back together with Jonghyun after Jonghyun had been such a cockmunch to him I'd have punched him in the face myself. . ___ .

D'aaaaaaw come let me smoosh your face around. ; ^ ; <333333

Don't forget, I'm hoping to have Inside Out finished by the end of May so I can get started on my ~other project~ *wink wink nudge nudge*

Maybe Birdy will get on board and finish reading this by the time that happens. o 3o We should bug her, yessum~

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slapstickhero April 18 2012, 03:38:26 UTC
█ ✫ spot for patzmelody01

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imvus April 18 2012, 04:06:31 UTC
Gosh that went so well!! Key is an amazing person for real. ( probably why I admire him so much irl and why this feels right) Not to say that it didn't take all this time to come to that and of course the love, understanding, and support of Minho helped a lot.

Just a wonderful chapter and a good place to be.
(hopefully Jonghyun will go sleep in Key's bed and Key will go snuggle up to Minho to let him know that it went well.)

And I love the fifth element! :)

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slapstickhero April 24 2012, 02:37:36 UTC
Minho's another kettle of fish entirely, but that's for the next chapter. x3

And no word of a lie, this chapter almost ended like that, but I couldn't find a way to work it in that I was satisfied with, so it got cut. x3

I love The Fifth Element too~

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lostluna April 18 2012, 06:03:17 UTC
This is such a lovely chapter. This entire series has been an amazing read, I love how everything feels real and normal and natural, how the plot and the characterizations don't feel forced and the story isn't tarnished by a fangirl bias that sometimes makes other stories too outrageous to be believable (not that they're supposed to be believable all the time - I guess that's why they're called fan fiction! haha). This is just perfect. I love MinKey and I am so happy they can go on with their relationship and leave behind the whole drama about Jonghyun, and it's a good thing Key and Jonghyun are friends again! Again, I love how the "confrontation" with Key and Jonghyun also doesn't seem forced, it seems so normal and true, not too dramatic, but still so deeply emotional and raw. Thanks so much for sharing, you write beautifully. :)

I hope Minho won't be too paranoid anymore in the next chapters! Hopefully Key will be able to quell his doubts and worries. :)

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slapstickhero April 24 2012, 02:39:57 UTC
; ____________ ; Thank yooooooooou I'm glad you've enjoyed it~

I figured with all the drama that's gone on between Jonghyun and Key, the last thing either of them would have wanted was more yelling and bickering. All of that would have been so draining, both physically and emotionally, and if they really wanted to drop it I figured this was the best route to go with that scene.

As for Minho... Old dogs can be taught new tricks, it just requires a little more patience than normal~

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fantasydesire April 20 2012, 23:41:18 UTC
ahah! muahahhahaaa... minkey is loved and yeah! leader onew is just hot. ^^

ps: good that bff!jongkey is back.. lovers!minkey is loved more.. thankies for the update!
XD

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slapstickhero April 24 2012, 02:41:17 UTC
Never doubt the Minkey! Not in this fic, anyhow~

Jonghyun and Key are the perfect comedy duo. There was no way I could break that forever. ; ^ ;

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