Week Two Challenge.

[lycoris]

Week Two Challenge; Final Session
Pairing: Percy/Lucius
Word Count: 299
Rating: R
Scenario: Why Percy really went bad, and ignored his family for oh-so long.

Comments

[blue_moony]

Oh, goodness! The Lucius in this was quite sinister, in a tastefully elegant way. And I especially loved the little touches - like Percy's shame for his apartment - that remind the reader he is indeed still a Weasley regardless. Nice job :D

[lycoris]

Thanks very much! I'm glad you liked it, I was worried about this one! Glad it works! :)

[wyoming_knott]

Whoa. Wicked.

Nice work. :)

[lycoris]

Thank you. :)

[maelwaedd]

Oh wow, that was fantastic! :) I really like your Lucius, and your Percy characterisation was spot on.

[lycoris]

Thanks very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :)

[sabethea]

i like the way he's "mr malfoy" to his face, but lucius in his head.... that rings very true.

poor percy

*snugs*

[lycoris]

Thank you. I'm so glad that you like it and that it works! *snugs back*

[versipellis]

I think it's a good reason for Percy being such an idiot, and the dialogue is very convincing.

[lycoris]

Thanks very much! I always like to hear your view!