Figure It Out

Dec 01, 2008 04:20


Title: Figure It Out
Pairing: Pete/Patrick
Raiting: NC-17
Summary: one-night stands and insecurities
Disclaimer: Not making any profit; Pete and Patrick belong to themselves; this never happened
A/N: A/U. There is no FOB; Pete goes to DePaul and is in Arma Angelus. This was inspired on Thanksgiving when I was driving down to my friends house, ( Read more... )

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dark_hunterjenn December 1 2008, 22:40:03 UTC
I can honestly say this is the BEST thing you have ever written! You have out done yourself my little Scion, it is fantastic. The whole nervous tension and "can't meet the eyes" actions are spot on for the situation. I love the guilty feelings and the whole backtrack style. I really can't wait to read more. Write damn you.

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slash_scion December 1 2008, 22:58:20 UTC
That means sooo much to me. I know you've been put through all of my crazy and crappy fics throughout the past couple years, so to hear you say this is the best I've written is a little gold nugget I'll always cherish. lol (it's all sentimental and such, but get over it!)

I'm glad you liked it. I did write this so that it could stand on its own, but yeah, I'm planning to write the companion piece to it (I've actually started writing it).

Love you soooo much!

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desireem81 December 2 2008, 02:27:18 UTC
Wow, this was, good, like really good.

There isn't a lot of Peterick going around, it makes me happy to see just this little thing but you blew me out the window.

lovelovelove.

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slash_scion December 2 2008, 06:10:54 UTC
Yeah, I have no freaking clue where the fandom went. I was cut off from the Internet for almost a year and when I was able to come back I found this pairing dying out...

Thank you sooo much. I'm really surprised that this turned out as well as it did. It was written in one sitting the other night, and was just based off a little plot bunny from "XO." But thank you soo incredibly much for reading and letting me know what you think! XD

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desireem81 December 2 2008, 15:33:17 UTC
It breaks my little heart. Pete and Patrick are my otp, I think I have written like a total of 6 fics that don't revolve around these two.

And no problem, I'm keeping a promise to myself where I said if read something, I'm going to comment.

XD

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spikesvampbaby December 3 2008, 14:31:16 UTC
Hey! This is really good.
I must say I kinda skipped a couple things lol (hope you don't mind, I'm sorry but there's a couple things I have to get over reading lol!) But it was amazing! There were so much good details and the emotions were captured very perfectly. I'm so proud, I wish I could capture emotions like this *sobs* lol

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slash_scion December 3 2008, 14:40:47 UTC
lol shut up! You're a really great writer!

Haha, it's cool-I didn't expect you to read the skicky parts..in fact, that probably would have freaked me out a little. ^_^

Thank you sooo much for reading! I'm glad you liked it!!

Love you bunches, oh sister oh mine.

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spikesvampbaby December 3 2008, 14:47:41 UTC
love you mores!
Now you need to get caught up on mine
Mwahahahahhaha lol
j/k
But no serious.
If you haven't caught up on it then
prz? hehe.

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slash_scion December 3 2008, 14:51:35 UTC
Yesh, I weel catch up on yours!

As soon as I get home from work tonight, I'll start re-reading it and catching up!

Ya know, I love this whole triangle thing you, me, and dark_hunterjenn have going on with our fics. ;)

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sweet_peas3636 December 6 2008, 18:16:25 UTC
I love one-shots, but a lot of the time they're no where near as well written as this was. For real. I especially liked how it started with the end, and I caught the FBR thing in the middle. I thought it was hella clever.
:]

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slash_scion December 7 2008, 00:52:50 UTC
Thank you sooo much! I really appreciate you taking the time to read this! ^_^ I'm glad you liked it too!!

Ha, yeah...I couldn't help but throw that in there. :)

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karluvmost December 7 2008, 19:19:13 UTC
This is so great. I just love tho whole thing, the order in which it comes, that way you make them act, all of it.
This is mmrs.

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slash_scion December 7 2008, 19:31:05 UTC
Aw, thanks!!! I've been wondering when would get around to approving this; I've already posted What Are You Waiting For? which is the continuation to this piece, if you would like to read that.

Thank you SOOO much for reading this! I'm so glad you liked this too. I put a lot of effort into it, ya know?

Aw! Mmrs? ^_^ *big hugs*

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karluvmost December 7 2008, 19:46:04 UTC
I'm on it right away, then. :)

No problem, bb, you deserves it. :)

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