What Are You Waiting For?

Dec 05, 2008 02:00


Title: What Are You Waiting For?
Pairing: Pete/Patrick
Rating: PG-13
Summary: no one ever talks about what happens after the one-night stand
Disclaimer: this is FICTION, Pete and Patrick belong to themselves, not making any profit from this.
A/N: I wrote this to stand as a one-shot on it's own but it's also a continuation of Figure It Out. This one ( Read more... )

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sketchofsoda December 6 2008, 04:48:09 UTC
After reading Figure It Out then reading this, its like yay! Seriously, when i read Patrick stood Pete up i was like WHAT PATRICK YOU FUCKING WHAT YOU!!! NNNN!!! But I'm glad you fixed them up! <3 The both of them was awesome!

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slash_scion December 7 2008, 00:56:14 UTC
Thanks for reading both of them! I'm really happy you got into the story enough to use caps-lock haha. ^_^ Yeah, I couldn't help but give in to the OTP that is Love.

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sweet_peas3636 December 6 2008, 18:58:22 UTC
YAY!
Although, seriously, my heart was like, NOOoooOOo!!! a few times there. I'm glad we ended up happy. "Fucked up," but happy.

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slash_scion December 7 2008, 00:59:42 UTC
Aw...thanks soooo much for reading these!! I put a lot of effort into them so it means a whole lot to know that they are enjoyed.

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karluvmost December 7 2008, 20:04:33 UTC
You're just that good!

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slash_scion December 7 2008, 20:09:23 UTC
You liked it then? :)

I know it's not got the same quality as the first one, but that's also because it's written from Patrick's POV as a seventeen year-old, so it's obviously going to be different.

Once again, thank you soooo much for reading Honey!

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karluvmost December 7 2008, 20:12:45 UTC
Yes, I like it. :)

I kind of have this thing for Patrick ditching Pete like that and Pete being all hurt. I don't even know why, lol.

This goes to mmrs as well. Can't have one without the other, right?

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slash_scion December 7 2008, 20:18:23 UTC
Ha, I know what you mean. I've not really seen too many fics where Patrick is doing the ditching or anything along those lines. I just wanted to explore that a little.

Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it!! ^_^

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jordanzgrl17 December 7 2008, 20:54:52 UTC
I just love 'fucked up', but happy endings! :) I really enjoyed both stories.

Thanks for giving me a reason not to read biology or do anything slightly productive. <3

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slash_scion December 8 2008, 03:36:26 UTC
haha. Don't worry, I wrote this while I was supposed to be sleeping because I had to open the store the next morning. (I ended up only getting three hours of sleep). I'm always happy to enable procrastination!! XD

Thanks for reading!

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intricate_life December 8 2008, 17:31:05 UTC
I did like this one as much as the previous one, if not even more! I could really feel the emotions with Patrick in what he was struggling with. Much love to you for writing good stuff like this!

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slash_scion December 8 2008, 18:14:09 UTC
*blushes* Thank you soooo much!! I'm really self-conscious about this one compared to Figure It Out, because that one seems way much better than what I normally write.

I'm really glad you liked this!!

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intricate_life December 8 2008, 18:20:38 UTC
I haven't read anything else by you, yet, so I can't compare. But maybe you're just getting better in general. Writing alot usally do that to you :)

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