"Playground" by kissing_athelas for thepsychicclam - Lotrips Slasha Baby fic

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Author: kissing_athelas
Title: Playground
Recipient: thepsychicclam
Pairing: Dom/Elijah
Rating: NC-17 (for bad language)
Summary: It's not that Elijah's pissed to see Dominic per se; but given his expectations, he wouldn't exactly say he's pleased.
Notes: thepsychicclam requested AU with a happy ending, and I was happy to oblige! Season's greetings - I hope you enjoy your gift. :)
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Comments

[randomdarling]

This is so adorable, I really enjoyed reading it. Your characterisations are perfect - I love Elijah being snarky - and the little hit of sadness makes the ending even more hopeful and heart-warming. Dom's terms of endearment made me smile. Happy Christmas! ♥

[kissing_athelas]

Thank you!! This was such a lovely first comment to get, and I'm delighted you enjoyed it. :D

[thepsychicclam]

OMG THIS IS SO PERFECT I LOVE IT OMG.

Cupcake!!! BWHAHAHAHA. LOVE IT.

So much of this is wonderful. I love the dialogue, the gritty, yet familiar, characterizations. I love Dom, because OMG I can see him doing JUST THAT. I also love Elijah and I want to cuddle him, oh my w00bie!!

And the unique setting! I love the idea of them being convenient store/gas station attendants lol.

And kissing! Kissing!!!

Orlando made me lol. And I love Orlando, so I'm thrilled at his cameo!

I can't say how much I love this. It made me grin the entire time and be happy and I love it.

YOU ARE THE BEST SLASHABABY ELF EVAH.

[kissing_athelas]

Oh, you're too kind! It was really fun to write this but very nerve-wracking to submit, so I was overjoyed when I saw I'd hit the mark. Your lovely comment was a great New Year's gift. *hugs*

[babydazzle]

[kissing_athelas]

Thank you! Your comment made me feel all fuzzy and warm! :)

[tweedle_]

Wonderfully snarky boys and nice gritty realism. They're going to have to work at it, but I think they'll find it well worth the effort and oh so entertaining. *g* I really did enjoy this. A lovely gift.

[kissing_athelas]

Thank you, my dear! I'm very happy you enjoyed reading my submission. :)

[creekside12]

Terrific story! Absolutely the Dom and Elijah I have running around in my brain. Wouldn't it be beyond lovely to see these two in a movie together someday - a contemporary, mates/lovers? sort of movie????

[kissing_athelas]

It would! Maybe we should all pitch in a few dollars each and make them an offer they can't refuse. ;)

Thanks for your lovely comment!