"Undertow" for dizzydame - Lotrips SlashaBaby 2012

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Title: Undertow
Recipient: dizzydame
Author: carribbe
Pairing: Billy/Dom
Rating: NC 17
Summary: A reunion, a change in circumstances, a sprinkle of jealousy, and a willingness to accept the chance to love each other again. Slight future fic - Los Angeles, USA - early summer, 2014.

Comments

[shegollum]

It's great to see this pairing and I love the idea of them reconnecting after years apart. A dominant, persistent Billy is a wonderful thing and you've definitely given us that! Thank you!

[carribbe]

Thank you.

A dominant, persistent Billy is a delight to watch in my book as well. Dom is a rather lucky man in that regard. :)

[itstonedme]

A dominant Billy who has Dom under his spell (and hands and tongue) is always a compelling read. Thank you for this!

[carribbe]

Thank you so much - I agree it is forever fun to set Billy loose in the dominance format.

[foxrafer]

I really like the idea of being given a second chance, and you show that fierce, undeniable connection between them really nicely.

[carribbe]

Thank you as well - I am hopelessly optimistic for second (or third, or fourth,etc.) chances.

I don't think either of them could exist without the other. They're hopelessly bound...

[dizzydame]

It is ridiculously awful that it has taken me this long to get to read this and comment, and I have a million apologies to make except right now the only thing I can really focus on is how amazing this fic is. You go between flawlessly beautiful writing and flawlessly hot porn in the beat of an eye and it kind of blows me away.

"I'll die if you stop, Billy, but I'm just as done for if you keep going." - I adore that line so much. And Billy fingering him in a semi-public place hellooooooo kink I forgot existed. But it's so much better because you know this isn't just sex, this is the start of something more for them.

Thank you so much for this fic.

[carribbe]

Oh, Darling - you are so welcome!

I was concerned about you as I know there are an abundance of computer issues right now, and nearly half the globe, or so it would seem, is ill right now. I am glad you are feeling well and able to read. The last couple of weeks of my own schedule almost did me in, and none of it had anything to do with writing your story, don't fret.

I didn't know I enjoyed this particular kink either until it just sort of erupted in the middle of writing things. I thought, "ohhh - well, maybe?..." I'm also a little embarrassed to say it may have given me a couple of other ideas. Blushes... :)

Porn in and of it itself isn't especially interesting to me, but coupling it with real feelings is where I believe the story always is. Billy and Dom have a lot between them - I just know if they ever got (will get?) together it would/will be extremely hot. They wear their feelings for each other on their sleeves as it is.

Tah!