KKM Fiction - Pretense

[slashed_dream]

Title: Pretense
Characters/Pairings: Shinou/Murata
Warnings: No warnings...and that's a warning in itself, isn't it?
Notes:  Since my English fails,

Comments

[neocloud9]

D'AWWW, how sweet! I love sleepy-fics. (Is that a genre? If it's not, it should be.)

"Why don't you go haunt some of the shrine maidens? I bet they would be honored," Murata commented sarcastically.

LOL

[slashed_dream]

Awww, thank you! (it TOTALLY should be!)
Glad you liked that xD

(That sokka icon wins)

[neocloud9]

I was just about to comment on your bodacious sheep icon!! XD

[xploded_tb]

OMG I SEE MY NAME HERE I FEEL SO HONORED I SHALL HELP YOU OUT IN THE FUTURE TRUST ME I AM YOUR GOOD FRIEND THAT ALWAYS CHEWS ON SPORKS AND SHARES CHEWED SPORKS WITH LIZARD_LITTLE AND I LOVE RUN-ON SENTENCES ALONG WITH STRIKE-OUTS.

=D I hope that came out well for you!

[lizard_little]

U CHEATER R U SHARING CHEWED SPORKS WIF OTHER PPLZ?

This humble non-native thinks you guyz did great wif this English <3

[slashed_dream]

and this humble fangirl thanks you for your humble opinion <3

[xploded_tb]

I IS NOT SHARING WIT OTHER PEEPZ. I IS USING NEW SPORKS. U IS CANNOT JEALOUUUUSSS.

WE IS HAS OUR OWN SPORKS. U IS TREASURES OUR OWN SPORKKS.

And thanks for the compliment. I really hope that came out well. After all, I edited it in like, 10 minutes. =.="

[reikohimesama]

I love it!!! Thanks for writing!!!

[slashed_dream]

Thank YOU~

[lizard_little]

STALKER!SHINOU X TSUNDERE!MURATA OTP!!!! <3

IT HURTS SO GOOD <3

I really liked th subtle humour and the descriptions <3 (I fail at descriptions!)

[slashed_dream]

*lets out fangirl-ish squeal* IT DOES!! <3

Thank you! I wasn't sure if I was being descriptive enough actually. I'm glad you liked it :D

[lizard_little]

yOU'RE WELCOME! I think the level of descriptiveness(??) was just right :D

[xploded_tb]

OF COURSE IT'S DESCRIPTIVE ENOUGH! IT'S EXCELLENT!

IT'S SLASHED_DREAM AND ME! WHAT DO YOU EXPECT??!?!?!?!?!?!?

WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!

SHINOUMURAKENZ LIEK, PWNS YALLLL DUDEZ!

[starrose17]

Sleepy!Murata wins at life.

[slashed_dream]

He totally does.

Thanks for commenting!